so why do I get the feeling that you're going to do something stupid like push Hinata an Sasuke together instead of keeping her with Naruto? Also I'd like to see a little girl on girl action maybe Hinata/Temari or Hinata/TenTen
I just went back and re-read from the start and wow. I love your writing style so so much. I am really into Dom/Sub but it's so hard to find a story that focuses on the relationship and not just sex. You really found a great balance of sexiness and tenderness that works so well with NaruHina. I especially love the aftercare scenes.
I forgot to include in my review but do you think you'd ever do a flip scene (Hinata doms Naruto for a bit)? I know you've already got some scenes like that with Ino and Temari, but the idea of the cute sub taking control for awhile is really hot and I think it would work great with Hinata, I picture her getting all flustered and stuttering even while ordering him around lol
Wow that was awesome you never cease to surprise me I think I have a new favorite chapter everything was so great.Lets start with Naruto and Hinata first since they were pretty much the main focus on this chapter ok so it was pretty hot everything was so perfect with having Naruto using the shadow clones and having him and the clone having their way with Hinata was pretty hot not to mention them playing with the suit was even more mouth watering and it was pretty cute seeing Hinata being so embarrassed and turned on that was pretty hot as well and the cherry on top was her having a mind blowing orgasm and her pleasing her mas-I mean boyfriend and its safe to say both Naruto and Hinata had a nice and relaxing time.
Now lets go to our stable couple Shikamaru and Temari man that was hot as hell as well and I loved the trap Temari had set when she told Shikamaru about the different oils she can use for his cock when that happen she got Shikamaru and won another round plus it got Shikamaru to stop complaining so that's a plus lol but hey at the end of the day Shikamaru can enjoy a nice hand job with oil and going to the erotic blossoms will be all worth in the end.All in all I loved the scene between the couple makes me wonder if Temari and Shikamaru were your new favorite couple to write.
To the last scene Damn they were so close to doing a quickie why why did you have to be a tease about that part!!.On a more serious note I understand Naruto frustration with the clan and him wanting a family I mean the dude has been alone his whole life and he only met his dad twice and mom once and back then that was under intense and serious circumstances so of course he would want a family to him that will make his life whole but of course he not going to pressure Hinata since she got enough on plate right now with the clan so Naruto has some time to be patience plus with what happen in his previous relationship Naruto has to be patient with Hinata before he can make his move and hopefully he can overcome his fear and relax Hinata is not the type of girl to laugh in his face.
Now for Saskue and Sakura man its getting worse and I didn't like it that she took her anger out at Naruto its not his fault Saskue is a hard person to talk to.Sakura needs to be patient when dealing with Saskue and try to go at his pace sometimes he not as passionate as she is.Also Saskue has a point marriage isn't all sunshine and rainbows and he giving Naruto a harsh reality on the bad side of marriage but Naruto with the way he going I'm sure he won't have to experience that.Anyway this chapter was hot and awesome and I want you to start the next chapter right now but I know you have other stories to work on so Ill wait anyway great chapter and until next time.
loved the chapter pushed off sleep way too late, I'm typing this with a blurry mind and dropping eyes. most likely reread it at some point to get a clearer picture of the chapter. it was very hot. really liked the beginning of the chapter with hinata. once her inhibition fell away it was perfect. loved how your ears and tail worked on hinata. Naruto and hinata relationship are really showing a strong dom/sub connection overflowing with turst and love.
as for naruto intimacy issues i really like how you dived into that. I could see hinata having some fears of being thrown away by naruto based on her childhood or her clan moving to somehow move to stop her from going any were even locking her up or block him. given there first meeting. and clan issues. given naruto's power level and Sasuke, his best friend being the only one who could physically stop him if things turned violent would help if not just sit back and enjoy the show. it wouldn't be unreasonable for hinata to fear fighting to break out. even naruto losing his dream because of her.
on to saruka, I wonder if she realizes on any level that Sasuke is talking about their children when Sasuke talks about the future of the Uchiha clan. that what the village is trying to do will be done to her children and grandchildren. I don't think it would help anything if she does. their marriage has too many foundation issues to be fixed by saruka realizing that.
there is a typo in ino and shika scence where you've typed 'oly' instesd on 'only' refering to the cream.
NICE and HOT as hell. I can honestly say this is a big step up fron the usual PWP or even PwithP.
When I saw you updated this story my heart skipped and missed a beat! Like when we find someone special surprise, it made my happiest day. The chapter is wonderful as always and hotter than ever, made me want to get into the story and participate too!
Temari's trap was also phenomenal. Reading about Erotic Blossom reminded me that I had some things I wanted too, so I had to stop reading to shop. I was inspired!
Sakura seems to think that Naruto and Sasuke are closer together than she is. This is rather ironic, since in this story Sasuke puts the cards on the table for her. She is too caught up in her own feelings and Sasuke does not know how to reach her. It's as if the languages their feelings say are different.
The continuation of Naruto and Sasuke's talk seems to promise to be incredible. This chapter showed that both have much to vent. So far they've never put all the cards on the table and talked about what bothers them. I feel that this would be the kickoff for Sasu/Naru/Hina.
I really enjoy this story I just binge read it the past two days. I love naruhina’s relationship they’re super cute. I feel bad for sasusaku bc their personalities just don’t mesh at all and they can’t understand e/o. Looking forward to more!! <3
I really enjoy this story I just binge read it the past two days. I love naruhina’s relationship they’re super cute. I feel bad for sasusaku bc their personalities just don’t mesh at all and they can’t understand e/o. Looking forward to more!! <3
I apologize for taking so long to review. Things have been crazy and my evidence is about to begin. It was a good chapter, you should know. Hinabunny caught me by surprise, even when I should not. It's almost a classic!