I'm telling you, I love this story. Lord knows it's difficult to find anyone expand Hinata's character to this erotica level naturally, usually it's terrible means or reluctance, so I'm happy how seamless and natural she came to this. I feel bad for Sasuke, I always thought Sakura was a bad choice for him and while I can see her side of things, I would not agree to her warped infidelity and I hope he finds out soon so he can perhaps finally get that orgasm. Honestly, I've always imagined Sasuke and Hinata together- like every aspect he would need would be easily fulfilled by Hinata, but then I remember Naruto, lol
Hot chapter. You blend passion with plot seamlessly. Keep up the good work.
I'm glad that your doing alright I was worried about what happened to you but I figured that you was a bit busy but I understand sometimes real life gets in the way on what you want do.Anyway the chapter was hot as hell I loved the bath scene it was nice and romantic that Naruto picked Hinata up and carried her to the bathroom and helped her bathe while he bathe himself while at the same time having a little bit of fun with her as well.I also loved the eating scene as well.Not to mention Naruto teasing Hinata and making her admit that she enjoyed anal was funny as well. Also the morning scene with her dressing Naruto cock was funny I wouldn't be surprise if she did that everyday in the future with Naruto though I doubt she would try that with Saskue.
Also I'm glad that Naruto and Hinata are moving in together I mean like Naruto said Hinata is almost at Naruto apartment everyday so its about time that they started moving in together since their relationship is pretty serious. But now all Hinata needs to do now is talk to her father and Naruto as well because of the Hugya clan and all of their restrictions I think you should focus a part of a chapter on that conversation and maybe have Kakashi teach Naruto about certain things a Homage should know after all he is going to be the next Hokage after Kakashi.
Last but not least the secert sex store Ino runs I'm actually a bit shocked that she runs a sex store though I shouldn't because of her nature and she probably knows a lot of secrets regarding people who come to her store she even knows about Sakura's affair with Lee.I like that she was looking out for Lee and warning him that the affair could end up with disaster and that no matter how hard he tries Sakura would never leave Saskue not after all the years she spent chasing after him and finally getting together with him and marrying him but Lee is headstrong and stubborn he not going to give up that easily he going to try to earn Sakura love and I loved how Ino told Lee about the transformation just.Not to mention this was where in this sex shop was where Sakura and Lee started their affair I was a bit shocked by that.Also I need a scene where Shikamaru comes into the shop do you know how awkward that would be for him and Ino.Also I don't think Saskue would dare step inside the shop due to how prideful he is lol.
Love the Hinata and Ino moment at the shop its another way for Hinata and Ino to talk about their sex lives and I loved that Saskue and Sakura theprist was working there as well and how kinky she is that was pretty nice and surprising as well.All in all this was a great chapter and don't worry about the ShikaTema side story and more of the therapy session I can wait haha anyway looking forward to the next chapter and what else you have in store :).
This is probely my most faverte chapter, though I not a big sauhina fan I am interested to see how you work him into the mix.I feel real sorry for Lee. I don't see saurka leaving sauske Amy more then ino does.
I do hope sasuke does confront saurka on it as someone who's been cheated on and seeing it happen with friends both ends of it the cheater always give off big hints even if the one being cheated on.
It's great to see you back. With such a hot update too. Naruto going full on anal with Hinata is damn hot. I can't help but wonder what those two are going to do next. Hinata visting a sex shop is great maybe she can get some ideas on what she wants to do. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Hope everything is alright on your end, but desperately missing updates to both monster and this story.
I really hope you keep working on this because its one of the hottest NaruHina stories I ever read! So hard to find good stories of them involving non-vanilla stuff, and I hate when people say rough stuff is out of character for them. The way you write it make it seem like the most natural thing in the world!
Have to admit I'm not really looking forward to Sasuke's involvement only because I love the straight NaruHina stuff so much but if you write it I'm sure it'l be good :)
Food for thought; you should have Sakura contemplate about a missed opportunity before commiting to Lee.
That opportunity being Naruto. I think it would add depth to her character if you write an enitre introspective scene about that. It should be filled with a bit of angst as well.
Now, I know this story is going to develop into some weird threesome between Naruto, Hinata and Sasuke, but I find that to be a bit distressing.
It has nothing to do with wishing for a pure naruhina smut or my dislike for Sasuke, but the fact that the character, Naruto, is once again being the Atlas for someone.
Someone that shouldn't be his priority at this point in his life.
How much does this guy need to give and sacrifice to have his ideal life? It's just really hard to believe that a guy that has endured so much is willing to offer his woman up for the sake of someone else's happiness.
At least, let him find a mistress on the side. Because between the members of team 7, if Sasuke still dedicates himself to his marriage, finds solace in Hinata and Sakura gets both Lee and him...
Naruto just ends up losing in this storyline.
There is just no way that Naruto can be realistically happy with this kind of arrangement. It doesn't really matter how well Naruto and Sasuke understand and trust each other. The rivalry between them--born from an inferiority complex to each other--will always haunt their bond.
I would honestly prefer if the mistress was Sakura; she is one of his strongest bonds. Who else could he truly entrust himself to on an emotional level?
Of course, I'm only saying this because there is a lot of potential for drama in my scenario.
does this story will involve cheating ( naruhina ) because i don't really like cheating stuff, so far i'm enjoying this story, i just wanna know if i should follow this story closely.
Uhhh... I hate to put a big hole in your story but you seem to have forgotten that Lee can't use genjutsu or ninjutstus. Because of his underdeveloped chakra coils he is incapable of using tecniques of these natures. As such there is no way he could use the Transformation Jutsu, so that whole scene with Sakura would be physically impossible. Sure he can use chakra for wall climbing and water walking but that is the full extent of his ability to use chakra with out the 8 Gates Technique. Hell the only reason he could graduate is because Might Gai scouted him personally.