Fuck this one is also incredibly hot. More smut orientated than Monster but still, the sex in this is so well written that it makes me press that NEXT CHAPTER button... and get annoyed that I have to wait . :D
Oh well.... :D
More please!
Another hot chapter. Naruto catching Hinata blindfolded and masturbating was hot as hell. I liked how you portrayed all the characters as adults who live their lives. So many fics in many different fandoms have them do the same things and act like they did as children. Also are Ino and Sai swingers? If they are perhaps a threesome between Naruto/Ino/Hinata.
I hope we see Sasuke soon, its chapter 5 and still no sign of him.
Wow!!! Seriously one of the best fics I have read on this site. It's awesome and just keeps getting hotter with each chapter. I've been following your other fic "Monster" as well and both the fics are among my favourites in this site. Eagerly waiting for the next chapter of both fanfics!! By the way, could you write a chapter where Hinata begs Naruto to create a few shadow clones and gangbang her? Would love to read that!!
Wow loved this! I can't wait until we see more of Sasuke with the other two. I'm usually not that much of a Sasuke fan, but you have me intrigued about the dynamic between the three. I'm excited about the next chapter!
Loved the cbapter, it was fantastic. The end with naruto going though so much effort to take cAre of hinata was perfect
Another hot update. I loved the spanking of Hinata. That was damned hot to have Hinata blindfolded and to spank her. I love Naruto's wild and aggressive and wild side. I always imagined he had one. At the same time though Naruto kept enough of himself not to hurt Hinata. He also realized that Hinata's trust in him and her submission were gifts no to be abused.
Hey I'm the guest from the last review and holy shot your a girl!! I didn't know I must say you are a talented writer and as for this chapter it was great, Hinata is slowly giving her desires and what better way to spend and share her desires then with the man she loved since they were kids and your right with the sharingan plus with the rinnigan Saskue can see everything and he can't unsee it will be in his mind forever so I hope you have saskue catch Naruto and Hinata doing the deed that would be so funny to see haha anyway great chapter and I can't wait for the next one.
Well now, that was interesting. I can't wait to see Naruto and Hinata try out more toys.
5/5 fucking loved it.