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by Slurppy

schedule October 17, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Continue this story plz

 

person halbvoll
schedule October 24, 2017 at 12:00 AM

What I am most missing in this story are non-porn scenes.

Kushina reflecting and talking with people about her current life is important. So far you have a solid balance there, but in my experience porn fics quickly loose that balance over time. So don't fall into that trap. So far the story is very well written.

 

Still, I want to see what happened to Tsunade offscreen ;D

person david15
schedule October 17, 2017 at 12:00 AM

So I was thanking if you still plan to have her be a hooker for the civilians how about since its publicly known that Kushina and Naruko are both contaners for the Kyuubi then Kushina could be made to call herself a demion whore or something to that efact maybe some roleplay with her acting as the Kyuubi in humian form or something like that.

person halbvoll
schedule October 10, 2017 at 12:00 AM

After reading chapter 2 I somehow want the sequel with Naruko+Hinata on their first 'test'. Does this make me a bad person?

schedule October 9, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Nice, I love stories where kushina is getting railed. Also nice touch with the all the way through cumshot and when tsunade was squeezing kushina until cum shot out her mouth and ass. Then to top it all of this story is extremely well written.

schedule October 9, 2017 at 12:00 AM

That hyuuga gang bang was awesome, another great chapter.

person david15
schedule October 9, 2017 at 12:00 AM

great chapter I hope you have more soon

schedule October 9, 2017 at 12:00 AM

What you should do is have choza use his partial expansion jutsu while he is in kushina ass until the tip of his cock comes out her mouth. Then he can use her like a literal onahole and maybe yoshino can suck on the part that is sticking out kushina's mouth until their lips are pressed together in a twisted parody of a kiss.

person david15
schedule October 7, 2017 at 12:00 AM

This is a great fic and I hope you wright more.

 

by the way I tride writing a review twice before but fore some resion they never showed up so please dont take a lack of reviwsas a sigin that no one likes your fic