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for Watarimono

by BigE2955

person Randomness
schedule January 21, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Awesome chapter. Blazing hot scenes. Keep up the good work.

person Randomness
schedule January 21, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Awesome chapter. Blazing hot scenes. Keep up the good work.

person Guest
schedule January 21, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Hi. Loved how perverted this was.

person uchihasenju
schedule January 21, 2018 at 12:00 AM

like the idea of sasuke sleeping with tsunade cause she is so damn beautifull and sexy  but the last chapter kinda felt like a watered down porno sorry  but i do enjoy your other works like narutos fetish and ghost kun

schedule January 10, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Interesting story 

person Literally Hitler
schedule November 23, 2017 at 12:00 AM

This fic is pretty good so far. Having read The Lone Traveler, I can really see the improvement. Not only has the writing in general improved, but so has the characterization. Feels like there's more plot to it.

The scenes are longer and more detailed, and you're branching out when it comes to the fetishes. Bonus points for spicing the sex up with a bit of clit action - I've gotten used to it being exclusively insert and fuck with big dick until orgasm.

schedule November 22, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Sasuke seducing and claiming women once again, but this time to ease the ache in his heart rather than to just satiate his abnormal/extreme libido and ego...sounds good!

Though I confess, I'm rather eager to see what will happen when someone like Sakura, who genuinely loves Sasuke, comes into the picture.

Those like Ino and Karin already have lust aplenty for the Uchiha-heir, which to be expected, but Sakura's true affection and warmth could very well disturb the guy, making Sasuke have a little inner crisis over what he's done...

And/or accelerate his fall into depravity, having Sasuke develop a worryingly possessive/domineering side when it comes to what he perceives as his.

In this case, HIS Sakura.

person ElChapo
schedule November 20, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Haven't seen you around in a while lol. Off to a great start with this story. You can never go wrong with Mikoto lol. And btw ignore all the bitch ass haters in the comments. Hope to see you update soon bro.

person Anon
schedule November 20, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Great story, great writing! Looking forward to more!

schedule November 19, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Not bad. Always love a Mikoto lemon. Hope to see you continue your other naruto lemon on that hentai site. Naruto temptations is the name, if I’m right. That’s a good story and hope to see another update of this story and whatever one you have next.