Is it really an harem, or a poorly concealed naruhina flick? You give way too much space to Hinata and her sister, so I'm beginning to doubt your harm claim.
So... if Kurama is there, and has her memories... does that mean the other Bijuu/Tailed Beasts are there and have their memories too?
I actually want to see them seeking out Naruto and Kurama to see if they have any idea what the hell is going on, and try to figure out why the world has changed. Instead, they end up being bred by Naruto and become his personal bed warmers and cockrags.
Balls have been drained once again. Good work.
Damn, you are just great at writing smut. This story is great, glad you updated! Hopefully you update your Shota story The Conquering Hero as well, one of only two Shota Naruto fics with Mikoto out there. Great work!
A nice way to introduce this world's version of Hinata, Hanabi, Ino and Sakura, plus some good bit on the end with the Hyuuga matriarch.
If you'd like to discuss ideas, here's my AFF forum profile, where you can message me at any time: http://www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/profile/28053-snake_king/
A few ideas I'll leave with you if you're interested:
* Hinata, Sakura, and Ino live with Naruto fulltime and abandon clothing altogether, thinking it'll just get in the way of their regular helping of his dick
* Naruto walks into Tsunade's office and asks if he can fuck her ass, to which she happily says "Did you even need to ask?" Followed by a long scene of him fucking her from behind while she hangs her naked tits out the window, him declaring various degradations and obscenities about her that she gleefully agrees to.
* Naruto has his mother and Tsunade put on a lesbian show for him that leads to him using shadow clones on both.
Just some ideas. You don't have to if you're not interested.
got to say these are some great lemons you wrote and i can't wait to read more
but i got to ask can you add the female characters from these series listed below to this fic
code geass
dirty pair
sailor moon
Asobi ni Ikuyo!
Moretsu Pirates
infinite-stratos
Nogizaka Haruka no Himitsu
vandread
maburaho
Tenchi Universe/tenchi in tokyo/tenchi muyo ova/tenchi muyo in love/the daughter of darkness/tenchi foever/tenchi muyo GXP galaxy police transporter
girls BRAVO
hanaukyo maid team la verite
ai yori aoshi
gravion
godannar
wedding peach
ufo ultramaiden valkyrie
wandaba style
negima
The Familiar of Zero/
ah! my goddess
Koihime†MusÅ/Shin Koihime†MusÅ/Shin Koihime†MusÅ: Otome Tairan/
Rosario + Vampire
totally spies
winx club
fstar ocean till the end of time
the legend of zelda
tales of vesperia
star ocean the last hope
Quite good and exciting
It may have the least plot, but it's hot.
pretty fun so far!
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! (^_^)
Super great story! It is really sexy. Keep up the great work!