I am actually upset this was tagged preg but there's not breeding. Where is my impregnation BROTHER?
Lowkey I think there's only two things you could do with this fic. Either end it properly with a second chapter, where Kushina confronts Sasuke and explains she knows it was him and then they have sex again. Or you could expand it into a full time harem story similar to your other works. Or you could I suppose expand it into a smut story that is only about the Sasuke/Kushina pairing.
Super hot, a sequel would be nice
The premise here is a bit lulzy. Now I'm picturing a perverted Sasuke running around naked and invisible to rape the fair maidens of the village. Enjoyed the twist at the end with Kushina by the way - makes her clever and funny rather than an easily taken advantage of bimbo.
From looking at the title alone, I partially expected some kind of story from inside the Infinite Tsukuyomi, though after giving it a read, I've literally been unable to not imagine a follow-up, or even another story altogether with a similar plot.
I mean, seriously, who hasn't thought of being invisible to everyone else, sneaking into a hot woman's bedroom, and casually using their body like the cheapest toy in the world whilst their husband/lover walks in on them? Speaking of which, great work on that one. You may have awoken a new fetish within me from this story alone.
love your work, can’t wait to see more, maybe even a continuation of this. That would be great!
Love this story and hope to see more down the line. For those that hate Sasuke I agree that in the show he is not the most lovable but his character is one of interest because of how he can actually be made into a centric character. Few stories do it especially lemons with Kushina and I think it is worth following. I hope I get a chance to trade some ideas for Kushina x Sasuke because I would like to get to know some of your ideas.
Is it wrong that I prefer to read the comments more than the actually story. Btw sasuke isn’t in anyway a good character or even an interesting one ,pre-shippuden sure but otherwise he’s just a power fantasy without any proper development because he was the creator’s favorite.
To datruth see this is the kind of silly nonsensical bullshit i'm talking about where the fuck in my rant do you see me dissing him you idiot i even complimented on one of his stories you sasusucktard moron WE CAN'T READ ANYTHING ELSE YOU JACKASS SINCE ITS MOSTLY EITHER BETWEEN CUCKS,BASHING OR YAOI!! GOD DAMN no one is telling him to stop writing all were asking for is a little break and more variery in the stories he writes jesus.