So I took a look at your profile. You clearly state that you write a "vast variety of fanfiction". I'm not seeing that to be perfectly honest. You seem to recycle the same ideas for the most part, over and over again. They almost always involve Sasuke cucking someone or having a "massive" harem. And I'm not sure if you are aware of what the NTR genre truly entails.
I won't even touch your proverbial fixation on Sasuke. Out of the eighteen Naruto fanfics you've written, almost all of them are either Sasuke-centric or he's a main character. You're by far the biggest fan of him that I've come across in fanfiction. To each their own, though I don't quite see the appeal in his character.
Maybe its just admiration, or a crush (not an unheard of concept), or who knows what. Perhaps you should practice writing more of that vaunted "variety" of fanfiction, and maybe take a step out of your comfort zone and try writing about other characters and/or other genres. It might even help your writing ability. If you can get past your love for Sasuke Uchiha of course.
Or don't. It's your life.
Another fun story like always. Despite the Naruto cock sucking fanboys bitching especially when this isn't cannon but rather the RTN universe. I will say i do wish Kushina had more time to go wild but oh well next chapter. Also to all those bitching about how it isn't glorifying Naruto as a Sex God fucking every woman into a orgasm coma go fuck yourself! The universe doesn't revolve around Naruto. And this is from a guy who has read alot of Naruto fanfics where Naruto has had power rivaling some of the most OP as Fuck Digimon and beither being ninja Jesus or Saten incarnate. So if you don't like then don't fucking read or come back when a new chapter comes out expecting it to suddenly shift to Menma/Naruto fucking girls silly and having thw bigget cock. To those who enjpy and give genuine criticism and feedback good job. Glad the people this fiv was meant for are reading it.
The story was amazing.I got hand it to you,your writing skills are awesome and you have a way to describe stuff.Even if it's a lemon you add good story to it.And please ignore those idiot narutards in the reviews ,they don't like anyone except their stupid favorite character Naruto to be in fanfics.There are a lot of Naruto fanfics in this site but few of Sasuke's and very few as good as yours so continue writing.your writing and stories are amazing.Can you continue the lone traveller saga and realpolitik fanfic.And ignore those idiots in the review section who continuously spite your fanfics or sasuke.you are free to write on sasuke and your right now the best writer on Sasuke in this site.
dont listen to the haters dude if they dont like your fics they shouldnt bother reading or commenting better yet they should write their own. your fics are the best so far especially narutos fetish the original of course. keep writing
(Clears Throat) to the following biased sasuke sucktards datruth, Anime lover and Meta1213 where exatctly do you see a decent naruto fuck harem centric fanfic on this site and before anyone of you whiners tell me to look on fanfiction.net let me just warn you now that site is in no way affiliated with this one so you can just stop right there please and thanks no one is telling bigE to stop write sasuke fanfics cause that's what he likes and we have to respect that or encourage someone to do a petty revenge fic where sasuke gets bashed out of spite for him cause that is just plain tasteless and tacky what we want to see as Arkwright so rightly pointed out variety alright another fic apart from sasuke or if you want to keep writing sasuke centric fics at give us a break from the naru bashing cucking that pop up lately i mean jeez that's not an unreasonable request and to datruth if you hate naruto so much and get your jollies of seeing him bashed and cucked all the time why don't you go set up a sasuke archive fic website dedicated to him doing just that so people can move all there hateful feelings of naruto bashing fics onto there and you can fap all day and night to that shit on your own time okay no one here is telling bigE here to either stop writing or go kill himself cause that would just be plain silly and nonsensical all we want is a fic that does not involve a naruto bashing or cucking somewhere heck i even liked the fuck brothers fic that he posted up recently its a nice change of pace where both naruto and sasuke are sex gods and pleasruing women try updating some of the naru centric fics that you have or even making fics off the fuck brother one for a change i liked that one heck bigE is probably the first person to upload on this naruto section to even try that concept and it came out pretty good just saying man and to the rest of the one that want ntr, basshing or cuck fics to go hate to break it to ya but you can't stop every cuck or bashing fic that pops up here there going to keep coming every now and again but when it happens so frequently it becomes a problem at least try to give some of us a break for the rest of readers who want to read something apart of an either bashing, cuck or yaoi adult-fic.
To LINK29.
Thank you for atleast being reasonable. I don't like everything you said but atleast you are reasonable. As for seeing Naruto based smut where Naruto is a sex god I will admit i haven't seen anything like that here for a while. There were a few here and there but i won't try and find them. And I do like the Fuck Brothers fic so no I'm not a Sasuke only fan. I mainly gave a lengthy review to tell those who can't be civil to fuck off. Seriously go and look at the reviews for some of BigE's other fics and you will see why i defend them. Still thank you for atleast being civil even if we don't see everything eye to eye.
Sex is written as hot as always, and the 'plot' was even original. And Kushina is always a must read for me.
But then it is once again mega-cock sasuke. I really have nothing against him, in fact I don't understand why so many people hate him so much... Still, I would love to see you write about other male characters sometime, for varieties sake.
This was an enjoyable read, especially since it uses a criminally-underrated ability.
There is an invisibility jutsu in the Naruto canon, created by Jiraiya. I'm surprised I haven't seen any Naruto stories use this idea before.
Bonus points for Kushina in this story. Not only is she as hot as ever, her deduction that it's actually Sasuke just proves that he'd have to work harder to fool someone who's been a ninja since before he was born.
This actually kinda reminds me of the movie "The Entity" in which a woman is molested by a perverted, invisible spirit. Except that was horror and this is fun.
Awesome work. Keep it up.
I have nothing against Sasuke,
but dude, It's Naruto who has Yang Chakra of Hagoromo, so his Body.
You are really a shitty author with all Sasuke Playboy fics.
Sasuke is the guy who doesn't care of girls.