more please
My fav. Please update
Beautifully written ! The heart to hearts between characters are spot on. Your clever word play and subliminal innuendos make taboo seem so natural. Take Sakura for example ,how naturaly fits into the role of mistress/dominatrix in Narutos life is magical. He has always sought her affection and cared for her opinion for as long as he could remember. How she sat him down and was 'frank' with him. It was almost motherly. Hope to see all four of them in the next chapter. Especially Sakura.
Very good job on this one.
This was very good. Not a wasted moment. The conversations kept my attention and were meaningful in regards to the situation. The pace was good. Could have given Hinata more POV to make her feelings and thoughts known. Sakura was brilliant. Her charcacter has so much to offer in regards to future developments. Don't overlook her. Now the ending left a craving for more and a subtle promise. Will we see how they deal with the aftermath in the next installment ?
Am I the only one that noticed how Hinata came twice and it was not by her husbands doing ...so kinky in love !
its almost blasphemous when hina says a dirty word lol I wana know so bad what is goin on in her head to see her hubby masturbating and watching
Oh man start on the next one right now !
So Sakura gets NOTHING out of this deal? AGAIN? How typical.
Nothing but a thibly disguised SH fic. Barf!
you are hands down the best writer on aff