Another awesome chapter. There were a few spelling mistakes but other than that it was great. Even though the smut is awesome, I am also enjoying the character development with the three girls. Just like with hinata and her father, it was a sweet moment. Or just like Ino and Sakura starting to notice naruto more and more while at the same time trying and struggling to stay loyal to sasuke. Of course the naruhina smut in this chapter was awesome with hinata becoming very bold and confessing her feelings and Naruto excepting them gladly. The fiance part came sooner than unexpected but it was nice. 1 down 2 more to go lol. Keep up the good work and can't wait to see the next chapter
The fic was very interesting, until doing this scene with Hinata, I hope it does not become a NaruHina melodrama.
Well love the lemon the hyuga having the uzamaki scroll and what he had was a twist but no more then the ending... im going to guess sakura would be next then ino
This story is sooo good looking forward to next chapter and if im right seeing how the girls are going to take living with naruto as he trains them... hoping they see is true stregth so they can see how easy he fought them * got that idea after hinata hoped he was going easy on them but still at a decent power so they woulndt be embarrsed* also looking forward to seeing him corrupt them slowly espically hinata with ino and sakura forgeting about sasuke and being replaced with thoughts of naruto
Love the story so far, keep up the good work, glad to see that you overcame your fever. And I'm looking for the next part as soon as possible!
Good chapter. The exam was an interesting take. I really liked how you made note that dependency on a comrade is just as much a detriment to one's personal growth.
There's really not much to criticize except for a few grammatical mistakes that don't really deter me from reading. You've expanded on the characters and their situations through exposition and introspection. You've made effort to paint the setting with your words. So all in all, it was good.
Until your next release.
Ayye ayye...
I enjoyed it thank you so much for this fic. I hope you continue it so like, keep up the good work.
First off I'm glad you're feeling better second I loved the chapter I can't wait to see how the parents react and the Anko lemon was hot
my dude please post on fanfiction dot net, this story is going to get more reviews and feedback there, please i beg you ðŸ™
Once again, another great chapter and I'm glad naruto finally got anko lol. And it's great that you're also feeling better and I also don't mind the monthly updates as long as you don't abandon this great story. I wonder how the parents and the girls will react to what naruto has prepared for them. Can't wait for another great update, great work m8