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for In the Manor

by BigE2955

person sublime
schedule March 21, 2018 at 12:00 AM
Love lust and friendship plz ! Focus on that plz its the best !
person Anonymous
schedule March 21, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Looking forward to the next chapter !

person Anonymous
schedule March 21, 2018 at 12:00 AM

So if your previous stories wasn't already majority of OC-esque situations that would NEVER be plausible even in a fanfic verse this has to take the cake. So Naruto just happens to disappear because an ex-machina needs to be made for an abusive scumbagish harem to be plausible. And if that wasn't already something to scoff at the fact that we're including it in Sasuke revolution A.K.A. The most hypocritcal, narrow-minded, and selfish global movement in Naruto second only to the Infinite Tsyukiyomi Plan itself. Yeah that's smart writing (Sarcasm). Thank God writers like VFSNAKE exist

 

schedule March 21, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Interesting start!

Though, while I know that "traditional love" isn't part of the story, I do hope Sakura will somehow feature in this fic, (perhaps in a sequel if possible) as someone Sasuke wants to possess for actual sentimental reasons (though he wouldn't say it aloud), aside from the more pragmatic one being that she's an heir to Tsunade's teachings, and thus her children would inherit her incredible strength!