Update please! :D
I like the way you’ve re-written this. While the original is nice, this one shows much deeper characters. Especially Mabui. The description of her need to really live goes far in explaining her reckless behavior.
Looking forward to seeing what happens next;)
Bring please make a harem of all the women!
I’m really enjoying this fic.
While the original you wrote is nice, the quality here is much higher. The way you develop the characters is especially strong in this version.
I look forward to seeing what’s next 😊
The original is still one of my favorite of your stories and I’m enjoying this new version so far. Here’s hoping you’ll give more appearances to girls like Tenten who didn’t show up much in the original.
This is turning out to be great. Can't wait to see where this goes next.
Lust love and friendship please