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by BigE2955

person random123
schedule May 14, 2018 at 12:00 AM

awesome - you should write more cuckhold stories

schedule May 14, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Oof.

I really like the pacing in this one! It's very short and to the point, which I, as a person who can't spend a whole lot of time reading super long chapters, enjoyed very much.

I'm a huge fan of filming hentai, so the fact that there was a lot of that in this short three-shot was amazing. And anything Netorare is good in my book.

I love how Tsume is so rough with Kiba. She isn't a gentle, caring mother, but a stern woman who sorta bosses her son around, and you've captured that aspect of her character perfectly. And the mother/daughter interaction is spectacular. That they play fight over who is the better whore is amazing. 

As for this chapter alone, I really liked the way Tsume described her first night's sleep after being creampied by Sasuke. That was very hot.

Thank you so much for being brave enough to write NTR/Cuck stories, senpai! 

<3

person Gundam-Knight-Chris
schedule May 7, 2018 at 12:00 AM

I have an idea you could do!

How about Sasuke walls in on Naruto and Mikoto fucking with Sasuke being impressed at how Naruto has more stamina (and a bigger dick lol) than he does?

It’s a little like voyeur, but Sasuke doesn’t have any hard (I.e. anger/hate) feelings and doesn’t feel humiliated until he starts jacking off to the scene.

- Christian Watson  

person Tony Trill
schedule April 27, 2018 at 12:00 AM

You’re still no using your brain to think about the word “cuckhold”.

How is Kiba getting cucked if he isn’t married or ducking his mother or sister?!

This is 100% voyeurism for Kiba!

person Tony Trill
schedule April 27, 2018 at 12:00 AM

I hate autocorrect.

Change “ducking” to “fucking” in my previous review.

person BigE2955
schedule April 27, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Sonic, or who ever you are, I'm honsetly baffled by the fact that you're either behind an awful attempt at trolling, or complete and totally naive.

Either way, my reviews aren't really a place to leave those kinds of things. If you want to talk to me or make any remark to me, come and do it to my face on my discord. I'll leave a link below.

https://discord.gg/t6FNfF

person Vlad
schedule April 27, 2018 at 12:00 AM

I like but want read some more of the lustv and friendship my friend

person Anonymous
schedule April 27, 2018 at 12:00 AM

BigE2955’s a bitch

person Aninymouse Deli
schedule April 26, 2018 at 12:00 AM

As usual good job. You never cease to impress. As for suggestions i tend to like rtn stories, maybe some playboy sasuke and bitchy hinata? Anywho good work and i look forward to your next story.

person JJ
schedule April 26, 2018 at 12:00 AM

This is a nice story and all but when are you going to go back to your glory hole story?