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for Hinata’s Debut!

by Carnageknight92

schedule July 9, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Thanks for the good times. I look forwards to more.

schedule July 8, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Well I didn’t expect that ending tbh, I think it was good though.

 

Now what, you plan on updating your Kushina story or write something new?

schedule July 7, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Good chapter bro

schedule July 7, 2018 at 12:00 AM

So good

person hibiki6
schedule June 23, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Am I the only hoping this ends with naruto divorcing her? It would be original atleast. Good sex scenes though.

person Jinx
schedule June 22, 2018 at 12:00 AM

oh man. those ending tho. please update. there is more right?

person Ookami88
schedule June 20, 2018 at 12:00 AM

I really like this story! Honestly, I hope you will write the next chapter, hopefully it'll be about Hinata and Naruto not divorcing or separating, but with Naruto proving that he can give Hinata exactly what she wants if those movies are any indication (Shadow Clones Gangbang). Hope to see at least one more chapter of this!

person redlox
schedule June 18, 2018 at 12:00 AM

please ione firnal chatper for a conclusion!!! we need closure!!

person Lou
schedule June 18, 2018 at 12:00 AM

for the love of god make him hate her. im sick of the shit people to to try and make him undrstand , so make him hate her do somehting no one else has done before

person Anon
schedule June 18, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Absolutely loved it! I can safely say this is my favourite fic on this site at the moment, I'm really glad Naruto wasn't the one behind it all in the end, that would ruin the cheating element in the first place. I can see why you would want to end it on a cliffhanger, but I would love to see a continuation. If it does continue I personally hope Naruto will forgive her, since he seems like the kind of guy that would forgive her of anything. Maybe he'll even be okay with her doing porn in the end as well.

Is there anyway of contacting you? I'd love to talk to you about this story. :)