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for Hinata’s Debut!

by Carnageknight92

person twerp22
schedule June 18, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Another amazing chapter. Can't wait for the next update to see what naruto does

person Ookami88
schedule May 13, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Another pretty good chapter. Maybe next one (since you mentioned in the story that Hinata has to do 3 movies) will be bondage themed, with a bigger group of men playing the role of her masters? That would be something see/read about!

person twerp22
schedule May 12, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Another great chapter

schedule May 12, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Good story, have you considered doing a Kushina smut story? Definitely that’s something I would read

i don’t care about the pairing you give her, but a Kushina story would be good

keep up the good work

person frix
schedule May 12, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Great chapter. Now to make a bold prediction. If I can read between the lines, then not only is Naruto the big boss behind everything. Every actor and cameramen is a shadow clone under a henge!

The clues were subtle, but nonetheless still there. So kudos for that.

schedule May 12, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Bro I freaking loved your story.  You made Hinata So sexy and naughty.  

I have a question for you.  Do you have an account on fanfiction.NET?  

I have some ideas for your next chapters of this story. 

 

How about a Hinata having sex in the gym scenario, for the next scene?  

 

I know Something that can make pretty kinky.  So if you're interested, We can talk about it.  

My user name on fanfiction is Lizardon888X

person Anon
schedule May 12, 2018 at 12:00 AM

This has quickly become my favourite fic on the site, excellent! Although I will be quite dissapointed if it does turn out to be Naruto behind it all, I'd prefer she cheats on him for real but still loves him.

schedule May 9, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Good chapter bro

person Jinx
schedule May 9, 2018 at 12:00 AM
waw. need more story like this. keep up!
person twerp22
schedule May 9, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Great story so far