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Chapter 1: Extremely bold. I happen to be ok for this kind of thing. It's fiction after all.
I thought the premise was interesting. The action was pretty good.
Obviously not many things can happen at this age but the foundation looks like it's going to have a lot of potential in the future.
I mean with the Naruko thing it's not EXACTLY Het - Male/Female
And with all the other characters it's also not exactly the tale of Naruto the Perverted, but more like Konoha village the perverted.
The story itself is really pretty good but it does feel like I didn't get what I thought I would get.
Love it and also a ton of possibilities for Naruto and Naruko to experiment around. Can you make one with Minato/Kushina/Mikoto or Minato/Mikoto. I really love these pairings.
Wow, this is hot. Hey man, do you accept requests?
FWIW, I did prefer the previous storyline. The new one makes less sense in regards to the title, but chapter 2 is really nice.
I liked all four chapters, but for the love of god start using a spell checker. And if your errors are intentional and designed to annoy people, use them more rarely!
it was good at a point, chapter 1 and the half of chapter two, but then you got sidetracked, please get rid of that bullshit, it's ridiculous, fucking sasgay cocksuckers everywhere
Nice, can we hope for more Minato x Naruko?
Defiantly need more naruko x minato, good work so far though.