And all those haters that shit on you and your fics say that you hate Naruto or that you are some "Sasugay cocksucker" yadda yadda.
Well look at this now. A Naruto harem fic. A bit tamer than the Sasuke ones, but definitely still hot with a dick meant to dominate. Looking forward to more. I like the idea that Naruto can go around getting a harem while visiting other places.
Will this go a similar path to Lone Traveler? I am interested in it.
About damn time you wrote some good smut.
And god damm was that some good smut. Your characterisation of Naruto was pretty much on point, as was Temari and Gaara. There's not much plot to point towards and comment on, but the prose was all wonderfully written as always.
Can't wait to see where you take this and how you differ things up with the girls and fetishes in the future.
A good opener. but please go for the realistic approach . dnt turn them into fuck dolls
Very good!