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by BigE2955

schedule December 12, 2018 at 12:00 AM

The Legendary Sucker Strikes Again!

person Siklos88
schedule December 11, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Goddamn. It’s not like it hasn’t been done before, but Tsunade smut in the Hokage Office always gets me. I like how you didn’t stretch out the whole Sakura thing, but didn’t dismiss it either. Can’t wait for the next chapter

person random123
schedule December 11, 2018 at 12:00 AM

narutoxtsunade is actually one of my favorite pairing, doesn't matter if it's a time travel fic or a regular one. naruto has to be at least 16 though

person Ghwaaron
schedule November 22, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Best story, more to come I hope?

person mechan
schedule November 20, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Have you read 'Stop Teasing Us Sensei' by lordoflust ? Its quiet arousing.

person sandmaster
schedule November 20, 2018 at 12:00 AM

your scenes are solidly written. and I'm digging the attempt at storyline.

look forward to the next ch. and ad a hinata fanboy can't wait

for her intro. keep rocking!

person Scandalf
schedule November 20, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Great chapter. It took a bit too long but eh. what can you do, eh? there is one other thing that I didn't like about this chapter though;

Honestly, people doing what Sakura just did in this chapter annoy me more than pretty much anything else. If something annoyed me more than this, it would probably go into disgusted territory.

Like, he basically told you he has some stuff to do, you understood that he doesn't want you there and then left. And then you just break into his house to see what he is hiding from you? Like, its none of your business bitch, just fuck off... It's not like he invited you to his house and then told you to leave anyway. You came on your own. And then after all that, she still acts like she is the victim... The worst part is, this is exactly what a real WOMEN would act like if the same shit happened... God, women are waaay more trouble than they are worth honestly...

person tgms
schedule November 20, 2018 at 12:00 AM

great chapter man, i hope that we get to see Satsuki soon

person yumi
schedule November 19, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Would have been nice to see a genuine love smut fic between naruto and tsunade without him refering to her as baachan. A real well written love fic

person Anonymous
schedule November 19, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Awesome chapter 

cant wait for more 

please comtinue 

dayum poor naruto

he can’t catch a break

hope the story is Updated sooner