First off, I've enjoyed the story so far, even though the smut in this last chapter is quite lacklustre compared to previous ones.
Also, is tayuya still a possibility? If not, tenten would be nice.
Keep up the good work.
Hot fucking damn this chapter was great. Temari turned him away and so he sought solace in Tsunade's ancient pussy. I love how you've turned the trope on its head with her, and I'm looking forward to seeing where you take things with her.
I'm also interested in seeing what other fetishes you end up bringing into this to vary things up when that becomes needed. Not to say that it is needed just yet. But still....
Anyway, good work, and I can't wait for the next installment. I need to go whack off.
What a chapter look forward to more
Continue, I want more!
Your writing is amazing and I love the amount of detail you put into your fics. Please keep up the amazing work and keep this fic going please.
Pls make the satsuki arc fast
The main thing I want to say is that the first and second chapter was great maybe even amazing but the third chapter felt pointless like why did you even post it pointless. there is no cliffhangers in porn maybe in porn with plot or plot with porn but never in straight up porn and there no reason to say this is anything more then porn the third chapter was basically put dick in move a bit she pass out then repeat now here a cliffhanger have a nice day felt lazy with how good your first two chapters were
damnit man. cliffhanger on tsunade. dick move. kinda digging the slow burn on the mindbreak and really lookong forward to hinata. kinda hoping for a cinderella moment
" the cock fits!" it'd be funny. anyway. keep it up and hope to see the next addict ch up soonish
That was really good, I love how you’ve incorporated Naruto’s personality into this. I also hope you do some more ‘loving’ lemons and not just breaking in this