Great Story!! Keep at it!! :)
Hot story, especially Temari's dirty inner thoughts and slow "corruption". There aren't many good naruto/temari stories, even in harem settings, so it's great to see a story like this. Looking forward to more of it.
I really like the plot line for this... I think I would be cool if naruto made each girl completely dependent on him via his cock
Please keep updating this story it's a really cool idea and also your writing is amazing and a multi chapter naruto story would be awesome since your main multi chapter story is sasuke centric.
Yo update this story
im lovin this narutema has always been a personal favourite of mine
Thank God your focusing more on Naruto. Honestly I thought you were always biased to sasuke but Im glad Im wrong. WE WANT MORE NARUTO. MORE PEOPLE WILL READ YOUR STORY THEN.
I really like how you put emphasis into Temari's point of view. It gives the whole thing a deeper and more intimate feeling knowing how she is breaking down step by step and her thoughts through each point.
Loved it, can't wait for more.
This was a great chapter and I actually loved that the chapters were in Temari's point of view I actually think in my opinion you should have the chapters be in the girls that Naruto have sex with point of view.