This was a great chapter and I actually loved that the chapters were in Temari's point of view I actually think in my opinion you should have the chapters be in the girls that Naruto have sex with point of view.
Fantastic chapter.
Once again I am really glad to see Temari get some love. And seeing her slowly get "broken" is actually really fun. I just hope she doesn't end up going into "mindless sex slave territory" whenever she is with Naruto. I always find it morr interesting when the girls in fics at least keep some aspect of their personality.
Originally I thought each act were for seperate villages with each chapter being a different girl. But I much prefer this. It allows you to delve deeper into the dynamics between characters. Which is especially nice for the less common characters.
Regarding, your next chapters, have you thought already about the different scenarios you are going to have? I don't exactly remember if you eger handled something like NTR but from Naruto's perspective. I know Sasuke is your favourite so that rules out the most popular victim, but there are several other options, A if you imply he is dating his secretary Mabui or Chojuro if you have him sleep with Mei and that's without mentioning the other Konoha couples.
Regardless, I look forward to the future,
LordSinnoh
Another great chapter ðŸ‘
Damn, I just loved those two first chapter! Didn't expected emari to be the first girl tho :3
Awesome how he finally broke her in he end and hope we'll see it happen with several other girls :3
First 2 chapters have been awesome. They are very well written. I can't wait for the next chapter!! Keep up the great work.
What a chapter look forward to more
Good chapter! I especially enjoyed Naruto’s interaction with Gaara. That was funny.
The writing itself is generally good, but it lacks your usual polish on the editing side (example you compare Temari’s robe color to ears and I think you meant eyes). There are also a few awkward spots where the flow is weak. Again, seems more like an editing issue.
overall, it’s really a compelling read and I loved it! Can’t wait to see what happens next.
I really like this story and i cant wait to see who else u bring in
I’ve been binge reading your stories for the past week now. At first I was a bit skeptical because I saw that they were mainly Sasuke stories, but I soon grew to enjoy the stories. When Addict came out and I saw it was a Naruto story that was a change. It wasn’t a bad change either. I have really enjoyed these past two chapters and can’t wait for the next to come out. Thank you for making this story and for taking the time to read this review.
I really enjoyed how you had the characters act and interact this chapter. It was a great read and the ending was a unique surprise