i think you should add more maybe somehow bring mikoto in, then have her with sarada, sakura, and then both of them lol
I love stories when Naruto dominates and cucks someone elses s/o. Keep going with this story mate! 👊👌
Oh, this is actually a different story from the one in the A/U section?
Anyway it's off to a good start. I can't tell you how many times I passed over it thinking it was a repost.
it seems a bit rushed. You should do a bit more world-building. you should mention what sasuke did to make naturo so mad, and you could try leaving a place or something to denote a scene change between the night of sex and the morning after, as that one line seems a bit inadequate.
Interesting story
Pretty good looking forward to the next chapter! Especially if there’s a threesome scene between NarutoxHinataxSarada!