Not to be That Guy, but when can we expect the next chapter?
Good chapter
First, very good chapter.
Second, thank you for continuing the story.
The version of Absolutely-Solid-Snake (who went by YamiWriter back then), I liked 10 times more than the original LordofLust. But that is a matter of taste.
Third, the way to close the chapter is great. I already want to read what the future holds for Kushina, the other women and the world.
I can only say:
* Without mercy, without prisoners *.
Keep it up.
Luck.
Love it! Is there anyway to discuss this story with you?
Interesting story
Yeah, you are right about the original story, some things didn’t make sense but (to me at least) it was fun to read, with that said now unto your version.
Though it’s a little advanced in the story, you show us more of Naruto’s POV and his problems, (not able to use chakra in this case) and he is frustrated about it because his parents aren’t there for him basically, both of them are busy, Minato being Hokage and Kushina “training” her team.
Hopefully, he’ll get through it and will come back.
Good first chapter and hope you don’t abandon the story. See you in the next chapter.
Punish all of them. No mercy
It's fine not liking my story, some people loved it and others hated it, I think that's how it is with most sotires, you can never really please everyone, sadly in the end the negativity won and i stopped the story. With that said I am a little bit confused as to why you would make an AU of my story rather than your own original story, though one chapter in may be too quickly to ask this. GL & HF writing on :)
I specifically made an account just to review this fic. This isy first review in this site. Honestly stop teasing us sensei was a retarded fic where Kushina chose 3 random OC over Naruto and Minato but whatever. Some of these fanfics in this site are so fucking dumb and the plotlines are ridiculous af. Cuck Naruto of fine for some guys not my cup of tea. But seriously Kushina cheating of Minato over Kiba of all fucking characters and Naruto is cuck or gets of from humiliation. No good Naruto lemons in this site at all and all of the good ones are either dead and the remaining ones are where he's gay. I'm ranting at this point now, as for the fanfic good start and how will Naruto deal with Kushina now???? What about her team will they be dead??? Who else will be in Naruto harem???? Will those 3 OC die???? Why does Kushina not take care of her children in any of the fanfic that I read.
glad you picked up this story!! I was pretty bummed when it was gone!! I liked the way you are continuing it. will ypu flip between Naruto and Kushina POV?