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for Primal Lust

by animehentaiworks

schedule October 24, 2020 at 12:00 AM

Please keep on with the stories

person Siklos88
schedule May 30, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Great to see you back! Looking forward to more

schedule March 17, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Hi, friend, I hope you are good. I just read this story of yours and it's very good. I hope you can upload more soon because I'm dying to read more of these fantastic stories. Good luck and good work. You also know if you can put something of sex Bestiality

person elchabon
schedule March 15, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Very good chapter Fucking clever fox Then he also seeks acceptance besides sex. I imagine that the change will go in two ways. If this is the case now, I can not wait to see what the chapters will be like as the days go by. Maybe Hinata could seek advice or consolation in Hanabi later on and in turn corrupt her as well, I mean as an idea of a special or continuation. And I feel that although Naruto is "angry", nothing serious happens, enjoy the change of your sex life with a little more flavor, hahaha. I mean, forgive the guy who pierced his arm from side to side with his body and tried to kill him many times. Not counting Obito or Nagato.

Keep it up, waiting for the continuation.

person Siklos88
schedule March 14, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Can’t wait for the next chapter! If she falls next chapter, that means 6 more of degenerate smut. Really excited to see what you have planned, and hope that there’s some bestiality

person elchabon
schedule February 22, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Very good chapters. It is an interesting story. Longing to see how Hinata falls little by little. Keep it up.

person Siklos88
schedule February 21, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Like the build up, always nice to see some rising action instead of just an immediate climax. Hope Hinata falls even deeper into degeneracy as the days go by

person Siklos88
schedule February 19, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Maybe have Kurama take an animal form one time when he fucks Hinata? Like a Fox or a dog

person DomM
schedule October 30, 2018 at 12:00 AM

An interesting start, will wait for more.

P.S. Please, update Revenge next!

schedule October 29, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Greetings there new authro I have to say that this plan is an ambitious one, but there's a few bumps in the project. Like a blacksmith creating a new weapon for the first, there has to be little imperfections that need to be ironed out. The blemsihes for this first chapter are the spelling and grammtical errors that need to be corrected before uploading the newer chapter, but other than that it sounds like an interesting concept. My recommendation is to proof read your chapter and fix all the problems with it, look carefully for any mistake that was made that is what the editor function is used for. If you don't have enough time to work on this I would also recommend getting someone to do the work for you, anyway this is just my honest observation do with as you will.