This was good. I liked it!
I really hope you come back to this story one day it has great potential especially with your writing skills.
Wait did she really left him blue balled seriously..
I dig it, good beginning of the story. frustrated, neglected horny women going for someone else
And I like how 50% of the chapter is build up before actual smut starts.
And opening bathroom door without checking if anyone is in there or not certainly sounds like something she would do.
Overall good chapter looking forward for more
Well then, this was certainly a ride.
To start us off, I’ll say that the concept is solid. There’s something about the idea of Kushina being left alone, all pent up and frustrated because of Minato’s job, that catches my interest. You handle it well, the story just rolls along nicely, and your individual writing style is further complimented by your vocabulary.
As for the story itself... I rightly don’t know what to say. I liked it, yes, but there’s something I simply can’t shake off. It feels familiar, in a way. Like I’ve seen this exact sequence before, but at the same time, there are parts I didn’t expect. Might be something to look into at a later date.
You keep up the good work, and we’ll see what happens next time.
Kushina smut is always nice, to bad its about Saugay and the author is secretly gay for the cuntboy
I dig this. Good story.
So kushi is gona be the dominint one here like 70% of the time atleast. It would be a waste if she comes ooff as the meek cock submisive type. She is a mature, confident strong woman here .The Hokages wife and mother of his child.
Another amazing start to a story and this one is going to be one of my favorites up there with addict so keep up the great work and have a great day.
I don't know how I feel about this. On principle I support it because it's a Sasuke/Kushina work. But I also feel like it was pretty passionless compared to some of your earlier stuff. It didn't leave me feeling satisfied. I suppose that can be forgiven if I look at this as a prologue only, with characterization and worldbuilding to come. But on it's own I can't give this succ.
Can't wait to read the next chapter