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by BigE2955

person Anonymous
schedule November 4, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Kushina smut now that's something I can always get behind I'm looking forward to how this develops

person ThisBarOfSoapContainsH2S04
schedule November 4, 2018 at 12:00 AM

@ANON

It's a damn shame it's written by such an underwhelming author with such generic/boring taste and a Sasuke fetish as creepy as it numerous, though.

person remy23
schedule November 4, 2018 at 12:00 AM
You are the greatest of all time sir.
person tgms
schedule November 4, 2018 at 12:00 AM

i love sasuke x kushina 

person kalamazoo
schedule November 4, 2018 at 12:00 AM
Very very hot piece of work. More POV time than generalization please, also a bit more of a plotline with some sexy situations. Keep at it
person smutluver
schedule November 4, 2018 at 12:00 AM
damn sasuke stretching her out good but still can't believe she left him blue balled...
person Siklos88
schedule November 4, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Why is everyone always so pissed off about this? It’s smut, of course it’s not realistic or in-character. I’m not even a big Sasuke fan, but this is getting ridiculous the amount of hate these stories get for simply having Sasuke as the MC. If you don’t like BigE’s writing I could understand that, but I swear every review is just somebody triggered about Sasuke

person ThisBarOfSoapContainsH2S04
schedule November 4, 2018 at 12:00 AM

@Siklos88

Not including Naruto or Sasuke, there's a bare minimum of twenty male characters that can be considered a part of the main cast. Not including a single villain. Outside of the main cast and including villains, there's no doubt that there's over a hundred male characters in Naruto.

And some people only want to write Naruto- or Sasuke-centric stories that we've already read dozens of time over the years.

tl;dr Shit's boring as fuck, yo.

person Siklos88
schedule November 4, 2018 at 12:00 AM

@ThisBarOfSoapContainsH2S04

 

It’s smut, not erotica. Who gives a shit who the MC is? Sasuke isn’t really Sasuke, he’s a blank slate with general personality traits resembling Sasuke that the author and reader project themselves onto.

person ThisBarOfSoapContainsH2S04
schedule November 4, 2018 at 12:00 AM

@Siklos88

That it's smut is no excuse. There's such a thing as smut that's both hot and readable, without resorting to shitty author/reader inserts. Generic anime character or not.

I'll admit I'm arguing an uphill battle, expecting people who write smut to actually write something that's otherwise mentally engaging since author and reader alike are there to bust a nut and move on; but there's nothing wrong with asking that the shit you read is above average-to-poor quality.