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for Naughty Girl

by Carnageknight92

schedule January 12, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Relatively short but still a satisfiable length. The smut is written well. I hope to find more kinkiness in the future. Thank you.

person REX3810
schedule January 6, 2019 at 12:00 AM

good chapter my friend, continues please.

a chapter of ino and tsunade please.

schedule December 5, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Continuatiion next chapter please friend 

schedule December 5, 2018 at 12:00 AM

"A masked shinobi was reading an orange colored book with the words Naughty Girl written on its cover, bearing a wide smirk underneath the mask while shutting the book leaving a marker with the symbol of a leaf on it." I've got to admit the premise is a simple one, and I like the way its original from the others. You've gotten my attention, however, there are just some minor tweakings which need to be made just like when the mystery man would tweak on Hinata's nipples hehe. All I've got to say is work on your grammar a little bit and everything will be fine, its gotten my curiosity peaked as to where the story will take from this point. Keep up the good work on this series I'll be paying attention to it whenever I get the chance.