awesome so far, keep it up would love to see more girls and see if they become entirely submissive to his dick
This was an enjoyable chapter. I would like to either see those past encounters with fu and Kurotsuchi or see Naruto meet up with them later on.
My penis has been once again bested.
Balls have once again been emptied. Good stuff.
Honestly, this is pretty good so far. There's definitely a good mix of smut, plot, and action to retain my interest. Especially the latter two, because most smut driven fics can get stale after a while without them. I have to wonder how things will turn out in the end. Good shit man, thanks for writing this.
Damn, I can tell a hell of a lot of work went into this. Well done!
I came. Repeatedly. That is all that needs to be said.
This is really good!!!
I'd say this is an interesting story with a decent plot, keep it up! I can't wait to see who Naruto sexes up next, but can he use what he learned from Tayuya's curse seal to give all his girls their own Kyuubi enhanced seal???
This is really good, well written and really engaging. You don't find many Naruto/Tayuya fics, never mind with Kin thrown into the kix, and it works really well. I'm looking forward to reading more when you are able to update