this made me squeal so much!! Fucking love your stories
Just when I thought up what to write in my review, someone already beat me to it. Dread, dread and double dread.
Well that just leaves me to write that I fully agree with TheFlamingDictator. So please forgive me my unoriginality, but know I did enjoy reading this story very very much.
Truly hartwarming story. In my view a great writer can make their audience emphatise with the characters. And it's just something about the way you write, the plot you've devised or the words you use. It jsut hit me right in my gut. As you described it happening, I could jsut feel the happiness fall away from Naruto's little face. It just makes the end when he finally get's real friends in the form of Gaara and Sasuke all the more sweeter. A true testament yo your skills as a writer. So thank you for that.
I hope to read more of your work, and know this. Regardless of what happens in the future, you are a great writer.
With kind regards,
Theflamingdictator