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by FieldDranzer

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schedule October 23, 2019 at 12:00 AM

You know what?  Screw it.  I'm reviewing this surprisingly great story!  Aside from the fact that I'm wary of reading new stories lately - as the majority comes from the Mr/Mrs 92 hoard - I was iffy on the whole AU idea.  Yet, starved for something, I took a chance and wound up kicking myself for not having done so sooner!

The progression of Sasuke (not my personal go-to character, but you made it work) and his journey with Tenten is so brilliantly paced; the sex happens, but isn't forced.  The writing itself is engaging and flows on its own.  The whole concept of Arch-Nightmares, I really enjoyed too.  One more week to go!  I'm really curious on what you have in store for the finale