AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Fantasy and Reality

by OzKanga

person Anonymous
schedule December 9, 2020 at 12:00 AM

Sexy times. Duh.

person Sobs
schedule December 9, 2020 at 12:00 AM

Lemons!

person Light
schedule November 9, 2020 at 12:00 AM

Brilliant he sused his chance to get Hinata, so only now I wanna see who more he gets, I would like to see Sakura here.

Also I think this can be cool:

Mito Uzumaki, Kushina Uzumaki, Naruko Uzumaki and HImawari Uzumaki.

Mikoto Uchiha, Sakura Haruno, Sarada Uchiha.

Hinata's mother, Hinata and Hanabi.

With this our main character would become the man who managed to do various prestiguous clans several generations at a time. If the Pregnancy option is able then the MC can have babies Hyuga, Uzumaki, Uchiha and Senju.

Plus he could even lead a easy life if he uses his Kunoichi to for example attack criminal gangs and organizations and stealing all their money. I mean if he had such warriors at his disposition why not use their skills to make his life easier.

He could with that money buy a large and isolated place where to live sweet days of pleasure, thus Please do not abandon this.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

person Anonymous
schedule November 7, 2020 at 12:00 AM

It's great. Just post more chapters please.

person Aqua
schedule September 18, 2020 at 12:00 AM

A gem in the rough is this story. If it does have more ground to expand this could be epic.

I think the protagonist should let himself to lose upon the temptation, after all his chance is trully unique.

Now for ideas I think adding Mikoto Uchiha to the options is a good choice since then the protagonist would have Naruto and Sasuke's moms to himself XD

Another would have a FemNaru to spice up things.

I hope you update soon.

 

 

 

 

person Dr Aki
schedule September 6, 2020 at 12:00 AM

Trully a wonderful story, you have a true gem here... but why NO updates!?

Come one I know this one can have much more chapter and also many options to have fun.

You know, being alone miles away from civilization and surrounded by beauties and having the means to control them does sounds a good plot so I kind of want to see how you make this work.

I for example want fun with Hinata and Hanabi.

I want Sakura with her butt being her main focuss, or have Sarada to join her for some mother daughter combo using a younger Sakura.

Or Shizune and Tsunade together.

Perhaps using a female naruto and having her do a combination with Kushina.

So pleae continue this!

 

 

 

person Kairyu
schedule June 20, 2020 at 12:00 AM

The concept is good... one can only wonder what can happen if your OC did have less a moral compass.

That being said I wonder if he will end being corrupted by having that much power over the girls.

I like what he does to Hinata, but having her as a genin would be adorable and since the option exist it would be a shame not use it.

Personally I would like to see Kushina acting as a maid or other role as your OC would fuck Naruto's mother!

So please, new chapter!

 

 

 

 

 

 

person Anon
schedule May 28, 2020 at 12:00 AM

Next chapter soon? It’s really good.

person U_I
schedule May 24, 2020 at 12:00 AM

Yo really like the story'n just wanted to check if yer still alive, also if ya want I can beta for you after my finals so if ya read this just look at your inbox on ffnet I wrote you there too.

person Mister X
schedule April 11, 2020 at 12:00 AM

I feel this story can have a good potential but I want to be more chapters since I am kind of hooked on this story!

Honestly I want to see more of what you do with Hinata... she is really pretty and I want to see what pervert things she ends doing (Specially I want to see a naked Hinata and other ninjas walking naked with a dog leash in their necks).

Also Kinda want to see her in her other ages, younger and older.

Others one Mei and Kushina, both powerful women who I want to see being subjected to the controler.

So I beg you to continue this!!!