Amazing story, I love the fact this one is not just mindless lemons after another, but it seems this does have a plot, honestly I want to see more how your protagonist advances and how he uses the control, tough maybe by having that much power over them, his morality could be in danger of falling down.
In his list of options i am surprised to see Kushina, and I beg you please put her in this!
could do without the accent and the odd writing but it seems ok i guess
Great shit.
This story is pretty interesting and I really hope you will have more chapters in the near future soon, since this story is getting good. Keep up the good work! Hope to see more chapters in the near future soon!🙂
Interesting take. Look forward to more.
Plz update asap
The MC reads more like an Australian stereotype than a human being.
I just want to give kudos to you for taking the different route of having the narutoverse girls enter the real world rather than the other way around. Also, I certainly love the casual atmosphere you set with the MC's interactions with Hinata and the more realism based foreplay. Personally, I hope there isn't any hardcore mind control thing that goes on considering the nature of power. Great job man, can't wait for the next one.
This is some grade A stuff...I look forward to future updates becasue I loved this. Keep up the great work!
Oh, questionable lemons? Looking forward to em. Liked the fairly realistic sex scene as well