Plz update as soon as possible I love the story
So far this is my favorite chapter of your fic and i really hope you maintain the personality of this Hinata, i know you're going to introduce more girls and such but i found this chapter so sweet and feels organic. First time i find a good lemon in here in months, please don't ruin it by making the characters bimbos and the main character unlikable (most of the oc fucks girls from naruto start good and then the main character start to call girls whore and then the fics become unreadable)
But at the same time the option of milf Hinata, young Hinata and so on with all types of girls in the fic could be really interesting to read (even with just 1 character there's a lot you can explore). Also something that will bother me if you make a timeskip or you start to add more girls, how will he pay for their food and basic needs?
Last thing, cand you post this story in fanfiction(dot)net, i wanna add it to favorites so i can now every time you update this story. Hope to see more of you soon ;0
Great fucking shit lad. Only a aussie would write something like this. Im excited for the next one. I do wonder, if the only girls you'll use in this are in the video game itself. If not, I recommend Kurenai, Mikoto, and Yugao being added tbh.
Looks promising! Hope to see more busty girls like Samui, Tsunade, Hotaru, etc
Loved it and i hope you continue it...not enough stories that take characters to our world. Keep up the great work.
Great story! I hope that you might use the other options in the controller, it would be amazing to see Hinata having different personalities or wearing differen types of clothing.
Surprising quality of writing. Hope to see more
Seems like an interesting story. Better yet, it starts with my fav Naruto girl, Hinata! I honestly can't wait to see how Ollie is going to use his newfound power over her!