c0p13r, I find these just to read your reviews. There much better than these half-assed excuses of "stories".
"Hiashi's gaze wandered over to those powerful thighs intermixed with muscle and fat were clearly visible"
I appreciate the effort to hide your 'copy and paste' ways, but the effort was halfhearted, disappointing, and ultimately silly. Say 'my speling and grammar is spot on' again! Basically, your notorious paragraph (not just the portion I mention) starts as a huge fuck up in so many ways: a gaze wandering over clearly visible thighs is redundant to mention, but there's also the issue of the structure of the sentence itself, starting with Hiashi as the subject, and then abruptly changing to the fat thighs intermixed with muscle and power being clearly visible!
Are you underage? Are you really blind and/or a woman?! Is English not your first language, though you profess 'spot on'ness when I mentioned your terribleness before?! Give me something to understand why you are so magical at what you do!!