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for Shrouded in Lust

by ShroudedShinobi92

person c0p13r
schedule December 5, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Wait... if it's not Silkos who says dyslexic, and it's not some other reviewer that doesn't exist... hmm...  Hey!  You're calling me a troller! How ungrateful!  T'weren't for me, you'd still be misspelling words, and have terrible grammar, and put the same paragraphs and awkward/unnecessary descriptions in each story, and write incredibly short... Oh...  I guess I am trolling

person Siklos88
schedule December 4, 2019 at 12:00 AM

I would never say 92-chan is dyslexic! I think they simply suck at spelling! Even the best waifus have their faults, don’t take it to heart

person c0p13r
schedule December 3, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Short... not sweet.  If that was a 'Hokage level' blowjob, then Hokage is pretty low on the standard scale.  I mean, Naruto just sighs when he spews his man milk down her well manicured, sun kissed throat?  No twitching, no explosive and unnecessary compliments, no 'I wanna fuck you with another guy!' outbursts that most guys give in the throes of a mind blowing climax?  Just a soft lil 'Ahh.  Let's call this a Kage-tastic blowjob.'  I will say this: this was the first time I read a full chapter of yours; your AN took up a quarter of the page, so that was funny.  Also... you write your entire 'stories' on the actual site?  Gross...

And I'm beginning to suspect this 'troller' you speak of is... ... Silkos88.

'a gallon's worth fo hot and sticky semen. ' dyslexic