it's sad to see that on this site there are so few good stories like this
hello, i'm a new reader, i really liked all the chapters of this story, i really think you have a gift, i just found this new last chapter incoherent, but other than that i liked practically everything, there was only one moment when i thought kurenai I was going to tie myself up with Konohamaru, but in the end, I really liked it, and I hope you will post more chapters.
Why even bring shikamaru into this?, I like the story but I am not here for a shikamaru story.
this story with shikamaru was rubbish, forget it and go back to the main plot
Things are really spicing up! I concur with JLDavenport though, it doesn't really make sense to me for Shikamaru to be vengeful towards Naruto specifically in this fic. Unless this is some elaborate red herring.
A Shikamaru with motivation? what a terrifying prospect.
I honestly can't imagine shikamaru fucking 1 girl let alone a harem just seems too troublesome for him.
How could u hate Shika? all he does is sit and watch clouds all day the least problematic character in the show by far
Not 🤢🤢🤢🤢 Shikamaru 🤮🤮🤮🤮, still gonna tune in tho 😈😫
Aww. I was really excited to see this updated, and happy/surprised to see Shikimaru finally freed.
But it's hard seeing Shikimaru as an antagonist especially towards Naruto who he's always had a great/trusting relationship wtih, and doubly so if we're start veering into cuck territory with Shikimaru fucking Naruto's mother, or Hinata.
Honestly, I'd rather see him team up with Naruto to take down his mother, he can see the damage she's done to Konohomaru and he knows how painful it was for himself. Take Temari back for himself, and work to fix the system, that seems far more his style than any kind of revenge or spite against a friend who hasn't wronged him (the earlier chapters told us not only that he was the one to ask Naruto to fuck Temari, but that he was happy to have it done since it let him be lazy about it. Unless that was all just him coping, it's strange for him to feel vengeful towards the guy now).
Ahwell, still looking forward to where you go with this. And eager to see where the conversation between Kushina and Naruto goes. And waiting for one day for Hinata to go use Naruto's cock in that hot-spring, especially if he hasn't already taken her virginity by now.
Pls try to drop more chapters already🙠It's been 11 days for goodness sake.😠i can't wait anymore
let's goooooo