AFF Fiction Portal
schedule June 3, 2020 at 12:00 AM

This is fucking hilarious. I love how you've crafted this investigation into the gloryhole, and the way you phrased Konohamaru not ratting Naruto out; perfection. It truly was selfless. Throwing his pride away and calling it a worm. Too good. I would still read this even if it had no sex in it, I enjoy the humour greatly.

Not to mention the romance forming between Kushina and Mikoto, which isn't going smoothly but is still cool. 

Then finally, the sex. Superb. Hot and Lewd. Not much to say here besides that they are really damn good.

Few things I am confused about though. Such as the few mentions to your name. Are they meant to be humorous 4th wall breaks? Or were they typos, some how? I don't know. My final point of confusion is the final line of chapter 5. Why did she mention Mikoto? I feel like I missed something.

I'll take the time here to show my degenerate, perverted side and speak my un-asked for wishes. First: for it to stay a 'only Naruto having sex' story. As in, no other men. That's just how I like it. Second: Kushina. Unknowing sex or blowjob with Naruto at the glory hole, and then knowing afterwards. Third: Impregnation. Naruto with anybody.

I don't really have any expectation that you'll humour me at all, but I figured, fuck it, might as well say something.

Anyways, lengthy review - fin

person JJ
schedule June 2, 2020 at 12:00 AM

I have to admit this story is awesome man I can't wait to read future chapters

schedule May 18, 2020 at 12:00 AM

👍👍👍👍😛

person Siklos88
schedule May 16, 2020 at 12:00 AM

You always do it to me with these fics copier. Great work