Weird idea, but I'd love to see a story where Naruto owns slutty Kushina but whores her out to others. Would also be cool to have Tsunade and Shizune also be domainted and shared like that.
I'm still not sure what to make of this story, but I am glad to see you coming back to it, and hopefully to your Hot Springs story too.
continue please
Really? Over 70 percent of the stories involving Kushina in this site involve her being a slut for basically every male in the elemental nations regardless of age. And you've added to it. This is one of your weakest works period. It's even weirder that it's always Kushina. It's so strange that people can't think of anyone else to cuck than Naruto and instead of using his wife, they keep on using his mother. Over and over. Alpha sasuke z alpha kiba, alpha chouji and even alpha fucking konohamaru. Seriously?! What is wrong with people. At first, I liked them but eventually, they just became sickening to read. And you of all people doing this just feels like a betrayal to me.
It's a very refreshing deviation from the linear mindset that more than half of the writers in this site possess when it comes to kushina and Naruto. The fact that more than half of the stories with kushina involve her being a slut taking a genin team , fucking one of naruto's friends while allowing them to bully him because 'cuck Naruto' or some OC or a kumo guy(most often the raikage) turning her into a brain-dead whore to either get back at minato or just because while ignoring the fact that most of of the OCs are civilians who somehow manage to overpower her and force themselves on her.
At first, it was alright to read but with time, those stories got old and eventually, I couldn't even read the summary without feeling sickened. It's likele you're one of the few writers with imagination who don't just write stories to bash Naruto needlessly and like to cling to the fantasy of Naruto being a cuck who'd just take his wife cheating on him or his mum getting mindbroken lying down and submitting to an 'alpha male' while ignoring the fact that he's very capable of beating them six ways to Sunday. In fact, more than half the stories in the her section is just NTR with a cuck Naruto. It's so bad that the stories with Naruto as the bull or just a stud are so rare, they might as well not be there at all.
The only reason I even occasionally enter this site is to see if any writer decides to produce something more than the usual ' I'll share my hatred of Naruto with other people by writing an unimaginative piece of work where I'll humiliate him in different ways because I hate him and I don't care that there are dozens of other stories with the same concept.' Everyone is entitled to write what they want and feel what they want about people but whenever I check reviews and see people commending the story like it's a masterpiece while giving the author suggestions on harsher ways to humiliate him, I just can't help but think 'damn'.
I mean there are other MILFs in the konoha but people insist on using the dead one just because she's the mother of the character they hate. The Jonin sensei part is just strange as well because it'd be better if people used say kurenai because she's an actual jonin and even better, she's very attractive!
This whole rant aside, you've shown me why I should never doubt you when it comes to a story and the fact that you're actually being imaginative is another bonus
Ooooo we finally get another Kushina story, I'm excited. Rooting for Kiba and Chouji dicking down Hinata and Kushina. Can't wait for the next chapter!
What's with the dumbass (probably RiasWaifu) making multiple anon comments to make it seem as if a lot of people agree with them? We know it's you since you are the only one constantly mentioning Chouji cucking Naruto even though the fic states the latter doesn't give a damn about Hinata in this AU (did you even read the fic?) and you keep making the same grammatical mistakes like missing commas and missing words (Examples: "Please dont the motivation", "I've been wanting to a rendition", "really getting my hope's for this story"). At least try harder, pal.
obviously write whatever you wanna write dude but, I like ur stories the most when characters aren't OOC well as in character as they can be while they fuck their family members
Dude you're really really really getting my hope's for this story. Your stories are really well made and structured properly but they are usually left on a hiatus and u constantly try to make a new story without finishing prior ones. "There is a hole at the hot springs" is possibly the only story u constantly update and quite frankly I think it's one of your weaker made stories. The cuckold Jiraiya and Kushina one and Boss's girl were two of my favorites and yet u haven't considered updating them at the slightest. Basically what I'm saying is I don't blame you at all but I just hope u start to consider updating your best stories more often. And this one is quite honestly my favorite it has more of the "Stop Teasing Us Sensei" vibes which I love. Would very much like to see Naruto get cucked by Kiba and Chouji. Anyways that's all hopefully u consider updating this story and Boss's girl soon. I'll even pay lol if that's the case.
It's lit 🔥 Keep that bum dog boy away from Kushina 🤢