Only complain I have, is that we didn't get a cameo of the kids, just mentions.....😃how about a bday party✨✨✨✨✨✨
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This epilogue is pretty good. I can't find anything that bothers me, so I guess it's your call if it needs to be fixed or improved.
I really enjoyed reading this story not only are my two favorite "idiots" the main characters but you creatively and realistically (for as far that is possible in an Mpreg) told about the struggles many in the LGBTQ+ community still deal with and that not every ending is: And they all lived happily ever after. Though the main characters did get THEIR happily ever after.
So thank you for this lovely story and I'll probably "see" you in one of your other stories!
Huggles
How about just you know after epilogue, uploading their life afterwards...like their kids growth and them growing old together 😃
I love your au's😄😃✨✨✨✨
The chapter wasn't awful at all and especially the birth part was very good in my opinion. What I said in my last review still applies!!
Huggles
I'll keep reviewing, but don't expect long and detailed ones, since you unfairly are just a great author with great ideas for stories!! So I will stick with: Great story love the plot line, keep up the good work!
Huggles
I love the story plot and the way it is developing. The grammar and spelling mistakes are minimal and don't make the story annoying or unreadable. All in all, I really enjoy this story and I hope you'll keep writing, cause you're good at it.
Huggles
And if you need a beta reader I'm available.