After reading potential ideas for the IG/Selfie account at this point I am wondering if Kushina will eventually start not caring about the post being for women. You've shown her in this chapter and the others to be more concerned with the numbers and other than some token resistance to it being men for the majority she is proud to be gaining followers. Personally, I am looking forward to seeing how she changes because of this. By that I mean if she will start to draw more validation from it and change at her core. Right now she still is trying to come across as humble, but part of me is wondering if she'll eventually act more entitled by the end of this story (she already seems to do so to me and she's brushing it off).
The guise for her and Sasuke to have sex was alright. Though unless you plan on having them trying to use family/large get-togethers to have sex (they seem to be leaning into as close to exhibitionism as possible) as a way to start everyone getting suspicious it might be a little unbelievable for these things to happen as often. I know this is a smut story, but with your statements on the fall and everything I assumed a matter of realism would be put through. I'd imagine Naruto would be suspicious soon if this keeps happening (blackouts) while he's home.
The lemon itself was okay, personally, I felt it was short and that it started off strong, but kinda was just 'told' and not described to us readers if that makes sense as it went along. Also, I'm rereading again and Sasuke only came once and then dipped. For how much you alluded to him being backed up I'd have thought he'd go for more, Kushina too. Though I'd guess the alcohol actually would handle that. (what with it causing impotence)
I'd imagine that the sex tape will be the next big sexual act between the two. Though unless it is a similar thing to their getaway I am unsure where it will be recorded. I'd imagine that would be a sex-filled day and not a simple 2-3 hour session.
Lastly, I don't know if you mean to hint at it but Kushina seems to be caring less and less after they are done having sex about evidence. Can I assume that this will be the straw that breaks the camel's back? (Her laziness) I really really am looking forward to the fall of their affair and I can't see this ending well still (and hope it doesn't, While I am a fan of happy endings I don't believe either of the protags deserves so in this instance.)
All in all a decent chapter, I didn't notice any spelling mistakes. Thanks for reading my word vomit.
What I can say I like how this story is going on and how kushina has slowly becoming more and more open on her relationship with sasuke. Maybe get her to open more for her fan page or something like that
Please, please let Sasuke fuck Kushina's ass soon.
Finally after 4 months
Wonderful chapter
I am eager for next let's see How the affair finally come to light.
Loved the way Kushina guided him to her room after party
Nice chapter! You have a few spelling errors throughout but it's not something I think is detracting from the story. I have to wonder though how much longer this affair can go on. They are both getting bolder when they think they can get away with it and there's bound to be something that will give them away. And again, gotta hope that it's not a happy ending. Not a bad one, but just not a happy one. They both seem unconcerned with the consequences and actually seem to find some amusement in picturing it. I'd like to see that arrogance or overconfidence paid xD
Other than that, the lime/teasing up to the lemons was also hot as well. Definitely, 10/10 ancestors will not speak to me again xD The only thing I can say for that is MAKE LONGER. MOAR. xD TOO SHORT (not really am doing a bit, but the sentiment I hope is coming across) all in all good chapter!
I just recently found this story and read through the reviews.
First, thank you for the read!!! I think it's a well enough-written story for smut and speaking of the smut it sure is exciting!!!!!
I probably will join the discord to ask if I don't see anything soon with the next chapter, just so I can get my own clarity lol. But I do wonder what the consequences you mentioned in the AN for chapter 9 are going to be. Like I said the smut is exciting! and I'm looking forward to however many more chapters there are of it. If I had to hazard a guess though, I think they were going to be caught soon and the story being wrapped up as this is an affair story. Probably after Minato's promotion or after the party (just my guess xD). From the sounds of it, she plans on having sex with Sasuke at her own home probably with the party going on (depending on if they both can go away for a quickie.) but definitely after it is over. I'd further guess that Kushina will try to get Minato and Naruto blackout drunk so it can happen. I can't tell though if it will fail as Minato doesn't seem like a big drinker and Naruto is still suspicious of Sasuke's interactions at the very least and may try to push for him to go home. --- Actually, now that I think about it, I don't think she has gotten any tattoos (something you said would happen) so the affair will probably still be ongoing for a few more chapters. I do think though that something needs to happen to showcase the beginnings of them getting caught and the party makes sense, at least to me of getting the groundwork started. Not to mention the video evidence on Sasuke's phone (Wondering if Sasuke will leave it and Itachi being the responsible bro he is, will unlock to double-check if anything is still ongoing)---
Going back to the consequences though. You did gloss over/mention this chapter (CH11 for anyone reading this later) what Kushina would be willing to have happened which is pretty much just letting the divorce go through without asking for anything. Which is "fair" of her to think xD. But I can't help but wonder what the emotional consequences of her actions are going to be and not just from Minato and Naruto. From the sounds of it, she still has some feelings for Minato (I may be reading too much into this) as you portrayed her feeling bitter about him not commenting on her nudity and being bent over at all and the thoughts of her impending divorce (specifically her not wanting to think of them at all). Her allowing him to have sex also showcases this (though now that I think about it maybe I definitely am reading into this. You stated her reasons were to keep suspicion off of her, but she could have just as easily said she was tired) and her feelings of lackluster sex seem to still bring this up. At least physically, as you described her pussy feels the heat of wanting a good pounding. Again might just be me reading into this, but they did get married after all. She must have found something of worth in him. If she does have some lingering feelings or maybe even not (following is just an idea for some drama that could lead to Kushina needing some sex to take her mind off of it) I'm curious to see exactly if, before they are caught, Minato actually has a sit down with her and talks to her about his lack of sexual care and apologizes and promises to do better. You've showcased him to be the trope of the responsible bread-winner husband that just doesn't communicate with his wife and vice-versa and you could have his promotion give him even more time at home. (Maybe a work-from-home job?) At that point, you'd either have some drama of her either feeling her love for him bloom again at his love for her and his want to do better. (Which I would think he'd maybe start initiating sex more and that seems to be her point of contention/feelings of loss in her marriage) And maybe start asking what he can do to be better (maybe not as good as Sasuke but still fulfilling sex just to throw in some confusion). Or have her just think it's too little too late and have to start distancing herself and throw herself further into it with Sasuke.
Regardless, I can't honestly think of Kushina and Sasuke getting a happy ending with their bonds with their families intact. ---Also, Sasuke still lives with his parents and has most of his financial needs met. He's in for a rude awakening with realistic job opportunities for someone in his position is slim to support a couple now that I think about it xD.--- But back to my thoughts on the possible ending. I can also see Minato actually putting off a divorce and trying to make his marriage work. My reasoning for this is that he's obviously not as forceful but he has shown a remarkable amount of care for his family and faithfulness to his wife (for a smut fic at least). I don't think any man after years of marriage would want it to be thrown away (though it is almost like a cuck mentality which Minato obviously doesn't have) If only to cause drama and keep the affair going possibly or to leave it bittersweet as Kushina either decides to break it off and stay with Minato (with more boundaries obviously) but a lack of "superb" orgasms anymore. Ignoring all that though, I can't see Sasuke's and Kushina's life, if Kushina does get a divorce, going well at all. She has no job and is a housewife But I think I've made this review long enough as it is.
I want to reiterate that this was an enjoyable read and an enjoyable smut fic as well. Please don't take my thoughts as negatives, just as ideas for the story possibly to cause more drama or they are just my observations of what I've seen and how I've interpreted the story. I look forward to the next chapter!
Woohoo new update hype!!!! Author-san did an amazing job with the realism of Kushina and Sasuke feelings for each other and now they can have more naughty fun now that it's clear they have each other's backs no matter what. Kushina Uchiha sounds hot, hope they take a lot more sexy pics together and make more sex tapes!
Wow, this chapter was great anticipation for the next! Can't wait for what she does for Sasuke next chapter
Is everything alright? Would love to see you continue the story or at least let us know where you're at with the chapter.
Well Kushina got a taste of what she can do when her anus is stimulated.
What I want the most is for Sasuke to fuck her in the ass soon and for it to be spectacular