I love your story and I like where its going. I hope you will udate soon with new chapters.
I'm usually one for good endings. Mabye alternate endings where Naruko gets payback for what Sasuke puts her through.
But I'm not telling you what to do with your story. I really am hoping for newer updates.
Unless it is that you've move your story to another website?
Love the direction. I read through way to quick. Very fun to read her slowly break. Looing forward to more.
The clone sex was pretty interesting idea actually. Great work on that. And just that last genjutsu, evil~! But oh so good.
Good work with the setting, the training teasing is fun, but I do hope later down the line we dont focus too much on training or at least in summarize bursts. Though I will admit the antics are funny and I do love a good bullying.
The mind unraveling, it is delicious! keep up the work on it. Loving all the creativity you're using. The grammar is also looking more polished too.
Mm, yummy bondage fun. Good training, keep it up!
You're getting creative with those genjutsu too. Very Nice.
ooof, that's a hard one for Naruko. Both losing her possesions and her black cherry (at least in the next chapter). Love the genjutsu just used to get her set up and I'm down for more bondage stuff. Just leaving her in positions to sleep in with toys inside of her, edge her to the max!
nice game to play, but here comes the exciting part! cannot wait what's done!
Nice use of genjutsu, hope he does more of it. How silly of her to not even wonder how he had a popsicle! XD
Keep up the good work and the training~
I've been waiting for this story for ever thanks for writing this