Nice to see some behavioral seals being used, like a shock collar, but better! Can't wait for her bedroom training. should be nice to see what's in store for her. So far its been cool with the shower scene and creep watching getting dressed part, so let the depravity sink further!
Admins put up something on the challenge page for you. IDK if you saw.
Pretty good, a little short and the dialogue felt a touch silted. Maybe have the characters emote more? Added more on the forum challenge and if you want to hash out ideas, i'll be there~!
Pretty good, could use some grammar cleanup, but that's fine. Though what age are they at? bc D cup at 12 made me blink lol. Excited for the first 'training' Naruko is going to get. Hope you mention which doujin or hentai you take inspiration from. Oh and maybe she should get a uniform change, like something from Taimanin? Heck, even training from that verse in general could be good. They even have slave seals on their tongues~
Hope for an update soon!
Oh this looks like fun. I can see a lot of milage out of this if done right. If you ever want someone to bounce ideas off of, I would love to see where this goes!