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for Uzumaki Lust Drive

by YamiWriter

person GZulu
schedule June 11, 2023 at 12:00 AM

You ever gonna continue this fic...at all?

person carrot
schedule November 21, 2021 at 12:00 AM

is this ever going to be updated it was realy good

 

person Cat
schedule November 2, 2021 at 12:00 AM
person Anonymous
schedule August 11, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Please update this story. Ignore the flames. people should have already realised that NaruKusi is going to happen anyway.

person Asj
schedule July 22, 2021 at 12:00 AM
person Please update this story
schedule July 22, 2021 at 12:00 AM
person Some Guy
schedule July 11, 2021 at 12:00 AM

So... did the Flames from the ofher site scare you off of continuing this story?

There's a clear double standard in the Naruto fandom where it's fine and perfectly acceptable for Naruto to fuck around and sleep with his friends' mothers but Kami help you if Kushina decides to have sex with someone OTHER THAN her own son - then it's time to get out the torches and pitchforks.

You can never please everyone and, in the end, your most important critic is yourself. You're the one putting all the time and effort into writing the story. Write what you enjoy and what makes you happy.

 

person FuckIssei
schedule July 11, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Ignore the flamers. I mean, in the end, Naruto will bang Kushina, who will dominate the MILFs and bitches he banged. That's a win-win.

person Siklos88
schedule June 20, 2021 at 12:00 AM

This was a really good chapter, and how Kushina was fantasizing about Naruto while she was with the Daimyo was great. Looking forward to more!

schedule June 18, 2021 at 12:00 AM

You don't need to defend yourself for writing a slutty Kushina. You'll notice the people who flame will do so with every chapter you release, because they're reading them all. 

 

Slutty Kushina is hot. Slutty dominant Kushina even moreso.

 

Still, I think this chapter could do without the scene of Kushian getting angry about Hiruzen supposedly ordering her to 'whore' herself out, especially with how easily she did it anyway. Maybe even have him imply spycraft or something to blackmail him with, but have Naruto's line of 'get home asap' ring in her head and she says 'screw it. Easy way it is.' etc

 

It'll read better that way imo.