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March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I just finished reading the first chapter and I'm honestly stunned. What a strong beginning! I'm already an addict. ^__^ *off to read the next chapters* A more detailed review will follow...
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September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow this tory was amazing you have gained another faithful fan i have never read a story that has affected me so much i like your style of writing and the attitude i am so happy i found your story i will slowly die until i can read another chapter i mean its another perspective of life for naruto and you make it sound so amazing so easy when i read its like u knew exactly what to say down to the last feeeling i think your story is amazing and admirable i wish i could write something this good but one question wat was it that they were totally oblivious too when they were touching each other i have been pondering over this for awhile heres hoping your next chapter is a hit whenever you put it up ja ne! deedeesan
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September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ok that first chapter was REALLY confusing im a bit lost. U_U
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February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow...o.o *blink blink* not much lemon and i still got addicted to your fic. that's rare for me. lol but i like your disciption of gaara and the way youpersonify the characters...however with me trying to write a fic and trying to gather bits and pieces from random fics that i've read (at least 50 definately mrore.lol) to make somethign resembling personalities for them and then here come and make them all complicated...dammit. xD and yes i love gaara to. ^-^ YAY RED HEADS! but what's the whole "double cursed" thing?......
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September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome, awesome. can't wait to read more. hope there's a happy ending, since everything has just been so sad. but it's your story, go where your vision takes you.
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September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this story is so great. I love it. The writing is just awesome. I hope you haven't abandoned the story, since it's so good - and I want to see what happens next! Such angst!
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June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm a bit speechless, 'cause last time I felt like that whas after watching "Seven"...
It's a terrifying despair and realisation that that's the real life goes.
But on the other hand, people (demons?) change and sometimes they can be forgiven eventually. Sometimes, yet not always.
This fic is a real piece of great literature. I'm sure you should be a fulltime writer.
And maybe you are? That'd be great. I would buy your books without a single question :)
Anyway, I love your work even though it's so chillingly sad.
I'd love to see some happines at the end but that's your work and it's entirely up to you.
Thanks for sharing it.
It's a terrifying despair and realisation that that's the real life goes.
But on the other hand, people (demons?) change and sometimes they can be forgiven eventually. Sometimes, yet not always.
This fic is a real piece of great literature. I'm sure you should be a fulltime writer.
And maybe you are? That'd be great. I would buy your books without a single question :)
Anyway, I love your work even though it's so chillingly sad.
I'd love to see some happines at the end but that's your work and it's entirely up to you.
Thanks for sharing it.
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March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
BRILLIANT.
Your writing style is so very unique and rich, your ideas very outside the box, methinx. Dearlord, I don't think I've honest-to-gods *read* a better Naruto fanfiction! And you say this is only the *middle*? I can NOT wait. I'll have you know you had me staying awake until *ten a.m.* reading this, after being up *all night*. I couldn't "put it down" so to speak!
Well, now that I sound like a pathetic ass. Heheh. DO NOT STOP WRITING.
This interpretation of Naruto is something that was wildly surprising to me, and so well executed.. ah yes. Evil bad mean cruel wonderful sexy wow Naruto.. I'm a freaking *addict* of yours, no mere FAN! Heeyee!
Mazeltov chickadee, FANTASTIC job.
I mean, I have *never*, EVER bothered to review a fanfiction before... and I've read hundreds.
YOU JUST TOOK MY REVIEWING VIRGINITY DAGNABBIT! (giggle!)
Ja ne!
Your writing style is so very unique and rich, your ideas very outside the box, methinx. Dearlord, I don't think I've honest-to-gods *read* a better Naruto fanfiction! And you say this is only the *middle*? I can NOT wait. I'll have you know you had me staying awake until *ten a.m.* reading this, after being up *all night*. I couldn't "put it down" so to speak!
Well, now that I sound like a pathetic ass. Heheh. DO NOT STOP WRITING.
This interpretation of Naruto is something that was wildly surprising to me, and so well executed.. ah yes. Evil bad mean cruel wonderful sexy wow Naruto.. I'm a freaking *addict* of yours, no mere FAN! Heeyee!
Mazeltov chickadee, FANTASTIC job.
I mean, I have *never*, EVER bothered to review a fanfiction before... and I've read hundreds.
YOU JUST TOOK MY REVIEWING VIRGINITY DAGNABBIT! (giggle!)
Ja ne!
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January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I feel punch drunk..gotta think about this.
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January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I haave been reading these fan fics for the last month or so to balance out the horror that is my mind and it worked(brain damage from an assultthenI got my ass abused for two years by a nurse/councelour )Reading this story to this point has been a screaam,Naruto and Sas turned so inside out ,everyone goneand Kama,the forest burnt,desolation ruling.It is so painful that I feelsilly using that word.I am not mad at the author,this is just a nod to the wild power of art .I am not sure if the story is really that good or I am that damaged but like Nar/Sas 's story is being created in my minds eye by the writers words
both are more because of the others ..efforts?.Anyhow,I kinda blew that explanation.I am in awe still at what creation,human creation is and can do. This author really has an undeniable power and skillthat moves me dreadfully.
I have a whole lot of things I Question about the character development(except Gaara ,for now) but that can wait.My need to let,umm repond as in kind as I could,to refer to my responce to the work just had to come tumbling off these keys right now.
I do feel tricked somehow possible SPOILER
is itashi possing as Naruto?God I hope so,or I am gonna have to find a different security blanket and that would be sad.Excuse the spelling and maybe the rant .I had to say fucking ouch somehow
chris
both are more because of the others ..efforts?.Anyhow,I kinda blew that explanation.I am in awe still at what creation,human creation is and can do. This author really has an undeniable power and skillthat moves me dreadfully.
I have a whole lot of things I Question about the character development(except Gaara ,for now) but that can wait.My need to let,umm repond as in kind as I could,to refer to my responce to the work just had to come tumbling off these keys right now.
I do feel tricked somehow possible SPOILER
is itashi possing as Naruto?God I hope so,or I am gonna have to find a different security blanket and that would be sad.Excuse the spelling and maybe the rant .I had to say fucking ouch somehow
chris