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by gelfling

person Campurr
schedule January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yup,its real,this pain.It reminds me too much of what I'm trying to escape .I have really enjoyed all these stories and this world and this site.
Gomen
Chris signing off
person hanne
schedule July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
man........could you just hurry with the next chap? Pleease! It's just...I Really want an happy ending to this; the story is so sad in chap. 12; I almost cried....(Don't tell anyone)....I Need the ending.Seriously. This fic has kept me so enthralled, I read the whole thing just now, so emotional...
person Anna
schedule May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A v. unusual storylittlittle hard to understand, but well worth the effort. It's nice to see a fic that explores language as well as plot.

~Anna
person Naru-kun
schedule February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Eyah! I like it... but... it's sad. *sniffles* Stayed up until 0630 reading this... @_@ And there's haven't gotten to the good SasuNaru... though, was very close in the last part. Can't wait to see what happens next! If I can stomach the angst... ^^;; I'm a horrible little fluffy bunny, but, the interaction with Sasu/Naru and Naru/Gaara was interesting enough to keep me reading. You have, btw, proved that I can, at least with Gaara and Naru, like Naruto as a top, lol. Write more!
person jessie
schedule February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay, now I'm REALLY interested. You had my attention before, but not things are getting interesting. Keep going. Please? XD
person Robofetus0
schedule January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I can't honestly say that I've enjoyed reading this, but I have to acknowledge it as probably the most skillfully-written Naruto fic I've ever seen. Wonderful job.
person skittles fairy
schedule January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love it. I simply love this. I love how you do Gaara's personality to. Please get another chapter up real soon!
person Charcoal Aquamarine
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wai, I very muchly like chapter 8. >.> *sits and grins, hugging Gaara plushie* Three chapters at once. Spiffy!! Good work. ^_^ I wuv this fic.
person Charcoal_Aquamarine
schedule January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
...Gaara naked...-_- mmmmmmmmmmm.
Oh yes, you going to write more?? You should. ^_^
person Allison
schedule December 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Woow. You know, this is the best Naruto fanfiction I have ever read. And that doesn't even begin to describe teh greatness of your writing. eel eel so sorry for Gaara. I love Gaara. I love Naruto. I hate Sasuke. :)