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for Melek in Olum

by samptra

person katie
schedule March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow, i love this story. please fininsh this!
person huzzah_ukelele
schedule March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
woo! this is a really good fic! keep going!
person Teki
schedule March 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome, awesome, awesomeotheother great chapter. ^o^ I love this series! *squeals* The only improvement I can think of is maybe checking over your work before posting. ^_~ I believe you meant, "definitely" where you put, "defiantly". ^^; But other than a few grammatical errors, awesome! I can't wait for chapter five! ^_~ Continue soon, if you can.
person Sara
schedule March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT! can't wait for the next chapter which I hope will be soon! I want to find out what happened to make Naruto like that I have to know!
person Iori
schedule March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeah can can't believe I forgot to review last time. I loved the whole teacher bit. I can just imagine Sasuke with a buncha little girls hanging off of him. Anyway, I kinda feel bad for him now. Poor guy. Hurry up and post the next chapter. I'm dying here. *Imagines your yummy Naru* (drool)
person SexySiriusBlack
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love your story!!! I am always looking everyday to see if it has been updated. Please update more often! I want this to be finished soon because I'm going to be leaving the country and I won't have a computer!!! So...please hurry!!!!
person lalalalala
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
grrr... they both like each other but are too dense to realize it!!! Where be da sasunaru yo?
person Jiro
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! I thought you forgot about this fic... I've read this on fanfic but I just had to review thisthis site too! It's so damn good! GAH!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! ^_^
person hanachan
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
whoa naruto is such a hottie in this fic^^ *glomps naruto*

great fic

intresting too

keep up the awesome job

and continue writing, ima be waiting

thx
person Shini
schedule February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hello. You won't recognize me, simply because I've never reviewed, here or on FFN. And there is ONE glaring reason. Each time I find this fic, I think, "Oh! I like how this has started!" So I read a bit of it, and then come slamming to a halt. You know why? Naruto is shorter than Hinata (He stands 2 centimeters shorter than she is) and to make him suddenly six foot ten (Which is taller than MY brother, and meaning he's damn near a giant) is ridiculous. Thes nos no way someone can grow over two feet in a few years, growth spurt or no. The most I've seen ANY kid grow is maybe a foot and that's luck showing it's weird face. Yes, maybe gradually, VERY slowly, they will grow nch nch or two, but they will not shoot up like a weed in the spring. So sorry, but this fic doesn't hold enough realism for me. Had you said that he was maybe a few inches taller than Sasuke and not a giant, then maybe I could have read it without turning my nose up in dit. t. And I'm generally one of THE most openminded people you'll ever find. Gomen nasai.