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for Melek in Olum

by samptra

person Teki
schedule February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love your fic! *_* Man, I wish I would have thought of this idea! Please continue. ^o^ I can't wait to see what happens.
person KARINA
schedule February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey yuppie neapteapter!
Hey did Naruto really did kill all does poeple? burr that gives methe chills. ~_~
Any way great chapter and hurry up with the next chapter.
Sayonara.
person LadyMoon
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Please up date soon. ^^
person archermartyr
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please, please continue this story! IT ROCKS.
person Rei-chan no chibi kitsune
schedule January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow... >//_O< *adds to favs* Please continue soon!!!
person kat
schedule January 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
.....Naruto is the farthest thing from silent. Naruto is also much shorter than Sasuke.
person KARINA
schedule January 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Man it took you long enough! ^_^
I almost forgot about this story. Good thing you come up with the next chapter. ^_^ You save the day!
I absolutely love this story and please hurry up with chapter 3.
ONEGAI!! ~_~
person Iliai
schedule January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is reaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaally good! I love it I love it I love it!!!!

Please do everyone a favor and continue; its well-written and mad awesome. Me likes. Have you noticed?

I love the way that you described things from Sakura's POV when she was musing about Naruto and Sasuke... very well done.

Please continue!!!!!

~~~Iliai
person KARINA
schedule December 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
.............AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HOW COULD YOU STOP IN ONLY ONE CHAPTER!!!! YOU...YOU..EEEVVVIIILLL!! PURE EVIL!! PLEASE PUT THE NEXT CHAPTER SOON!
Its a great first chapter and I am interested in moHey,Hey, Sakura is out of character in this one.
But still great. I don't have anything againts Sakura but she would be a problem in Sasuke/Naruto's relationship.
Please hurry with the next chapter.
I'm dying to know more!!
Bye Bye ^_^
person Clover
schedule December 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WAA!!! I like I like!! more more! lol.. I like how you have changed them all, very intresting, I can't wait to see where this goes.. oh please do update...