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for Melek in Olum

by samptra

person AlleyKitten
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMGOMGOMGOMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! *pounces* yay!!! i lurves it ^_^ can't wait till there's more... there will be more, won't there? *puppy eyes* please say there'll be more???

alleykitten
person Lidy
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*tears of JOY* It took me FOREVER to find this fic...I remember back when I FIRST read it in ff.net and hardly anyone else was reading it and then, I couldn't find it...but, then my friend said she read it @ mediaminer and I was so happy and then I found it here and an upload and and and T.T I'm just SO HAPPY! Thank you SO much! I've been waiting SO long for an update, you have NO idea...thank you thank you please, please, please update as soon as humanly possible! What a cliffhanger! Sasuke KNOWS! He KNOWS! x.X And they KISSED! ;.; Oh, the happiness and suspense!!!
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Samptra! Welcome back! I've stalked this fic for many a year and to see such a surprising update! ^_^ And they said NARUTO was the number one ninja of surprises! I can only pray and hope that you won't leave us hanging on chapter ten for too long. This was a wonderful chapter. Their interaction has pacified me much, but the end has me worried. I will continue to stalk this fic, like many others, until the very end! XD We missed you!
person Kiara
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Really wonderful plot! I am certainly looking forward to reading the future chapters. So, please update soon. Hmm, can you please tell me where you found the name and what it means? Thanks, cuz it's such an unusual title, it caught my attention and I am just curious.
person Monkey Lady
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeeeeaaaahhhh! I'd given up hope this would continue! Oh I'm sooooo happy! I like that Sasuke jsut found out about Naruto's real occupation. Should make the next chapter interesting! I like your style and the suspense you are building. Geez, I'm 25 and giggling like a preteen. Haha. Love the work. Can't wait to see more.
person AI QING
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like your story so far. It's really good, but your story contain so many grammar errors. Please correct your grammar. It's hard to read it when you noticed so many grammar errors.
person DevilLived
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
GAH! This story is awesome. Unique plot, it rocks! What's gonn happen now that Sasuke found Melek in Olum's clothes? Update soon!
person Sheli
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay you updated. I almost gave up hope. Welcome back. I was wondering when someone would find out who he was and what happened to Naruto. I suppose he'll either run off or be sworn to secrecy now? Or will Sasuke be jealous that the so-called Chuunin is the legend? Here's some chocolate for the update (trying to see if bribery will work to get you to update soon :D)
person RyuichiSakuma2
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's good. ^^
I want to read more. Now. :D

-Ryu <3
person natty
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
noooooooo.....Why did you stop it here great story by the way