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plz update soon!!!

I will HURT YOU if you do not update this fic!!!!!!!! LOL!!!XD Kidding!

I want to read the next chapter of this fic so very badly so please, please, pretty please update???? X3\


I would be glad to proof read your fics for you if you still need a Beta or an editior. I am good with grammer so I would have no ploblems with that.

You are a fabulous nwriter and you should be very proud of yourself!!! I can't wait to read the next chapter of this wonderful fic!!!!!


Sincerely yours,
X3
Demon_Fox

Why don't you update? this is the best Naruto fic I've read yet!

~Hawk

*jaw drop* okay now, you absolutely HAVE to change that horrible summary!! this story rules, and i would have freakin skipped over it had i not been bored!! So tell us what this story is actually about in the summary! it will draw eyes!! ^^ n e way, i HATE the fact that you can't have author alert on this site... it would be SO convienient... n e way, if you find the time, i would greatly appriciate it if you could inform of the next update. ^^ Your story was a very pleasurable read. Good job! Update soon! ^_-

woot woot! i'm so glad you updated! I've been waiting FOREVER! woot ok sorry, I'm just super excited, and by the way, i didn't think this chapter sucked! this chapter was more of a ... breather in the story ... ::nods head:: yup, yup! anyways, please update soon! i love your story!

Great story... Update soon! Im looking forward to it!

I've been reading this fic for awhile. It's great that Naruto is taller than sasuke for once! And my favorite part of this chapter is theuse use why naruto doesn't wear shoes (I just hope he doesn't step in anything nasty barefoot). ^_^

:3 You continued~! Yay! ^^ ^^ ^^.

one thought that one would never get the chance of reading a new chapter of this story, as it is old and has not updated for ages
=3
luckily one was wrong

I like where you're going with this - your writing style has potential. However, the grammar and spelling really does it in for me. Naruto's last name is "Uzumaki" not "Uzamaki". Also, "where" was put in instead of "were" as well as other spelling errors like "barley" (the stuff you eat) versus "barley". I hate to be a nitpick, but I must be honest and say that those minor details do take away from someone's writing. Also, quite a bit of dialogue/thoughts are out of character so that I can't even ima the them coming from Naruto or Sasuke. That might be something you could consider working on.