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for Melek in Olum

by samptra

person The Schiz is too lazy to log in
schedule November 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 7 review. OMG I rememthisthis fic. I read it here and on FFN as Minerva. I've missed it so. So glad you updated. Yum, I can't wait for the SasuNaru or NaruSasu jazz.
person Jena
schedule November 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Glad you're back! Aside from the few spelling errors, I enjoyed it immensely. Next chapter please!!!
person emiko
schedule November 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I've been waiting SOOOO long for this! Finally the next chapter is up!!! I simply adore this story. It's so unusuo reo read a story where Naruto actually is living up to his potential. Keep writing this excellent story!
person Edward
schedule September 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please....please....please...write more. I read the start of this fic awhile back. I like what you've added, but i really really want to read the hook up part! And thanks for giving the lee and sakura pairing some play. I heart lee. And his eyebrows...sorta.

Edd
person Frizzball
schedule August 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
man, this story so totally rocks! Nemo moment over, i love your story! i love the way youv'e made Naruto so tall and strong and ...manly and saskue so gracefull and feeling! dont stop, i was a little worried when everyone said you didn't update this for yonks so please dont do that now!
you happy and faithfull reader
Frizzball
person Fayweir
schedule August 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ADD MORE TO THE STORY, ITS SOOOOOOOOO GOOOOOOOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I've been waiting for an update for a really long time. i wanna read more *CRY*
person phicklampa
schedule June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this series! Really great and I can't wait till the next chapter... please hurry!
person xXKaskading_DarknessXx
schedule June 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really this fic, I like how you made Naurto tall and all, especially in those assasination clothes *thumbs up* really nice ^_~* Hehe, I LOVE the couple NaruSasu, I absolutely love it ^~^ Please update soon, I'll be reading ^_^ *waves*
person Silver
schedule June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMFG SHE UPDATED!!!!!!!!!!!! -dies again- ok, sorry, HAD to do that. but omg, thank you!!! please write more!! you have sucha rich writing style and a really LIKE(hinthint) it. a LOT. m<^w^m3w~~~
person ookima
schedule June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
update really soon! I relaly love this and how Naruto's secret and hard life is